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Author Name: FreePoetgrandmaster 3 Comments
Date Added: September 23, 2004 19:09:40 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Times That Fall
Happiness?
Just how precious is it?
People just throw it away,
Not thinking of what they hold in their hands.
They love the feeling,
But they just don't think of how important it is,
At least not until they really need it the most,
Especially when they have chemical imbalance,
Or many possible forms of depression.
The feeling of sorrow rushes through my vains,
But I just want happiness,
Which was slain..
I feel so frustrated at little things,
And even bigger problems I may encounter.
I can't sit still in class,
I just want to get up and move around mostly all of the time,
I just feel fidgety,
I move my fingers and legs back and forth,
Up and down really fast,
Or just blow air out of my mouth really hard..
A surge of great pressure builds up in my chest everyday,
And it feels like it is going to explode,
Or I'm just going to destroy everything in my way!
Instead I just walk by and say "Hey".
Author's Notes:
I wrote this poem to express my feelings towards frustration. I will probably be working on this often.
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeBi bi baby on March 14, 2005 10:23:27 AM Report
Ack! I hate that feeling. Too bad I hafta be careful if I'm gonna play with my knife at school...*grins* I like this one!
Comment By: Freegrneyedbtch on September 25, 2004 02:12:10 PM Report
great way to get out those feelings. really good job. keep writing-livi
Comment By: FreeCarolina on September 25, 2004 01:42:42 PM Report
i think i know just how you feel. i do the same in class. im trying to stay happy but its hard but ill keep trying cuz its all i want. "Or I'm just going to destroy everything in my way!
Instead I just walk by and say "Hey"." i do the same. sometimes i cover up my feelings so well it scares me. I hope we both get our happiness...good poem i like it.




 


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