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Author Name: Freefranki68 2 Comments
Date Added: January 14, 2005 11:01:21 Average Score: (Needs 1)
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Message in a bottle
Our friendship began on the shore by the beautiful
Sea nerves held back by an undercurrent and a calm slight breeze.
A bond became instant almost like a river and a stream
trickles of tears and laughter did make our friendship beam.
Searching through the depths of our emotions to unravel our hopes and fears we decided to plunge to new heights, lasting many years.
At the beginning it was hard to adapt to the rapid way of life
I began to feel very isolated trapped in a furious tide.
I needed my very best companion to help see me through the storm but she drifted away and left me to fight through bitter waves all through till dawn.
Whatever happened to our friendship, it began like a glistening waterfall trust and honesty did no longer exist, so a riptide ending put a stop to it all.
Our underwater experience felt so real to me, and now its all too late for the trickles of tears, because to you I was the best friend you couldn't see.
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Comment By: FreeShajeea on February 27, 2012 07:03:55 AM Report
Nice.................................................Shajeea
Comment By: FreeMeghan on January 19, 2005 10:12:56 AM Report
Wonderful write.




 


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