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Author Name: FreePunkchick 2 Comments
Date Added: July 11, 2003 01:07:28 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Him
I think about him, and what he did to me, I felt like I was locked in cage, never to be free. His fist's in my face, his hands around my neck, When I was with him I felt like I was going crazy, that I was a wreck. I really thought he would change, But the more I was with him, I realized he was deranged. It took me a long time to realize that what he was doing to me was wrong, I stayed with him for far too long. I finally gave up and opened my eyes, I got tired of listening to all the lies. I finally left him and everything behind, I know longer feel like I am confined. So now that I feel this eternal bliss, There's one thing in life I know I won't miss...Him.
Author's Notes:
I wrote this poem to remind me of what i went through for so long and how i was able to get out of it. I am not the happiest person in the world.
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Comment By: FreeKati on June 26, 2009 12:04:41 PM Report

Nice content! You could do a lot with this concept, especially since you have experience behind it. There are infinite possibilities and I'd like to see it expressed with lots more description! But this rhymes really well and it has a good message. Good job!


Comment By: FreeJeff on July 24, 2003 08:24:02 AM Report
Nice writing Crystal.
Jeff




 


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