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Author Name: FreeJakeInAZ 4 Comments
Date Added: July 14, 2003 01:07:17 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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The Last Time We Spoke
...Hello?
---
Ok, I guess I heard you right.
This is more than just another fight...
---
Sure, I guess I made you cry
And I can't tell you I didn't lie...
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Alright, I guess I didn't show it
I just never thought I'd blow it...
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I know, I guess the fault is mine
And I suppose you'll be just fine...
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Yeah, I guess it's over now
But I still don't see how...
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Sure, I guess you're right
Maybe it's time I just said goodnight...
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Ok, then we'll leave it at goodbye
But I can't promise I won't cry...
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Yeah, I guess this is it
You're a gift I won't soon forget...
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I know, I guess I'm just stalling
And I guess you won't be calling...
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Ok, Can I tell you something really quick?
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(click)
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I love you.
Author's Notes:
Well, they say there are two sides to every story but sometimes, when you really feel strongly about something, one side is all that matters. Maybe "this guy" should have done a little less talking and a little more listening.
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeKimberly on June 12, 2005 10:45:38 PM Report
I loved this poem and some men just don't get it belive me if mine would listen he'd understand what pain is...But that's men....Great write thanks for sharing take care,Kim

Comment By: FreeDiana on May 5, 2004 01:33:46 AM Report
Wow, this is a very creative write. I love it!
Diana
Comment By: FreeBarbara Demasson on July 14, 2003 12:00:49 PM Report
Too bad he didn't say the last line first. Very interesting format here Jake, well done!
Comment By: PremiumShe Whispers on July 14, 2003 01:05:47 AM Report
THI POEM TELLS IT ALL ..TALKING ANND NOT LISTENING IT HAPPENSS EVERDAY....EXCECLLENT




 


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