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Author Name: Freeblackberrypatch 3 Comments
Date Added: June 23, 2005 13:06:40 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Night Of Silent Love...

Night Of Silent Love....

It was at the end of the day

Sitting on a dirt road watching the night start to play

The pretty, deep, blue, sky blends into the washing opeg of still night
 

The time was basking into the darken creation,

In theatrical rivialials of troubleshots in the night

Ah, yes, the glistening, pepperwort in moon spree snapshots in perception
 

Out of no where a lady appeared she blended this projection in perponderance of realitys life

Through the cortex of happyness and love this projected into a beautyful strife

She ran the water from her babbeling brooks of her eyes

All of this pleasure wanted to go for a swift, clean, ride
 

Those viberent hazel eyes stoodout for a peek in a world of there own

This my friend I could easyly put upon a thrown

The night came into it's own pleasure

Cheohearently put, with night behind covers,of rear shinning treasure
 

She walk in the line of being a serious love in dark time blues

I guess it was time to pay reality it wanting dues

A shooting star pass between our eyes of sight

This all became a trin-ket in a beautyful night!
 

In the silent night of loves delight.... 

 

Author's Notes:
Ok, this just came to my mind while I was into my second beer ....I guess it was a guy thang ,I don't know ....Sitting having dinner It started to roll, I can't explain the writer thang ... So, it is something I just do!....enjoy! Oh, yes, I was alone ...and I had some ribs and a baked potato and cornbread...ect....Man, oh, man what a dinner.....tell me what ya think ...Should I have desert? 
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Comments:
Comment By: PremiumThe Bag Lady on June 28, 2005 07:03:20 PM Report
Just you, her, and that shooting star...
This is great write, Patch, and the dinner sounds scrumptous my fried.....
Margaret.....the old bag lady
Comment By: FreeBarbara Demasson on June 25, 2005 10:54:34 PM Report
OH what a night...wow...what an exciting encounter. The magnetism is obvious here Karl...very nicely said.

May I suggest you proofread your work, perhaps use spell check too as the spelling errors detract from the poem.

Good stuff Karl...write ON!!! =))

~Barbara~
Comment By: PremiumGlata on June 24, 2005 08:14:39 AM Report
Well, dinner sounds delicious, lol...go for desert! This poem is great, Patch, and tells of the longing in your heart for your heartmate.
Great job!
Glata




 


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