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Author Name: Freeblackberrypatch 4 Comments
Date Added: July 12, 2005 15:07:18 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Weaver Is Not Tight Anymore

Weaver is Not Tight Anymore

 

You are in sharp distress

Without any thankfulness

Can't see, there is no view

Why, did I stare at you?

 

It happened when we met

I saw your eyes and you were all wet

Your beautiful lips, I wanted to get

Me and you, now that's a set!

 

Looking at your face, I felt, as if I was an ace

Without any kind of disgrace

Holding your head high

When I saw you, I wanted to fly

 

Tonight, in the dark, we will meet

When we kiss, Oh, yes, that will be such a treat

With our love we can't compete

After that, we will be truly complete

 

I am like a dog, I will bite

All I know, is you are out of sight

I now feel, so, out of sight

You and me, let's go fly a kite!

 

Now, that I have been dwindling, day by day

In the light that will not stay

You won’t be able to go out and play

With kindness that's fully blown

Unsought visions that is really unknown

                                                           ,

You see, my friend, it's not so wrong

Grab and hold on to life, just like we belong

Resetting does not have to be totally alone

When it's time to catch up to your Jones

 ,

Do you feel the heat? Is it hot to you?

Making it complete, that’s for us to do

While you’re lost in a moment of time

Just remember, in my heart, you will always be mine

 

Your happiness is being in the pink

While thinking of me, try not to sink

What goes around comes around, for sure

The love that I offer is simply pure

 

Because, Weaver is not tight anymore!

But, she wills always even the score

Manipulative speaking, it is there

Watch out and please, beware

 

There are those who don’t really care,

About such a perfect affair

You will truly understand

Also, you will start to listen, to all of those commands

All I know is I am in love with you.

Please tell me what I am supposed to do!

You see the Angels wrote this on the chart

My love you and I can never be apart!

 

My arms are open to simple say

I am in love with you in every way!

This inspiration is based on a true story

Being with you, I am in my glory!

 
                                                                                                                    
Author's Notes:
This is what happens after a divorce...This was about six years ago...I guess it is time to repair....Being alone I will try to be human.... 
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeBarbara Demasson on July 17, 2005 03:30:07 AM Report
Sincere emotions are what makes this poem. The others before me have said it all.

~Barbara~
Comment By: PremiumGlata on July 15, 2005 11:27:32 AM Report
hon the world will be beautiful for you again, and your heart is a loving heart that will bring much joy.
Beautiful write...
Glata
Comment By: PremiumThe Bag Lady on July 12, 2005 04:36:42 PM Report
Your world will be whole again, Patch~ With a heart such as yours, you will erase the pain with life~!
,,,,,,Margaret....
Comment By: PremiumShe Whispers on July 12, 2005 04:31:41 PM Report
PATCH
AS I READ THIS ITS SADNESS IS VERY MUCH STILL ALIVE.
THIS PAIN YOU WRITE I FEEL THE END OF A LOVE..
LOVE WILL FIND YOU WHEN ITS TIME..
BECAUSE THERE IS MUCH LOVE IN YOUR HEART... HUGS ~ SHE




 


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