I WILL TAKE YOU SOMEPLACE by Joe McNinney

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		Date Added: July 19, 2005 11:07:45	Average Score: (Needs 2)
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I WILL TAKE YOU SOMEPLACE

I will take away your pains,
and I will try to make you smile,
I will ease away your strains,
and make your day worthwhile.

Your beautiful little face,
should never have a frown,
I will take you someplace,
where you will never be down.

Come now and take my hand,
and let's get away from the strife,
Together we will make a stand,
and be happy in our new life!

Author's Notes:

Thank you so much Glata for the inspiration here, Joe

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	Comment By: Jo on July 28, 2005 02:31:12 AM	Report
	Aww... you're a doll. this is sweet. Respond To This Comment

	Comment By: grneyedbtch on July 25, 2005 07:06:32 PM	Report
	what everybody wants...very pretty, joe. as always, i enjoyed this. keep it up, you're awesome-livi Respond To This Comment

	Comment By: Samantha Firefly on July 21, 2005 12:00:35 PM	Report
	Wow! This is wonderful, Joe. Awesome write. Samantha. Respond To This Comment

	Comment By: Henry M. on July 20, 2005 03:13:26 PM	Report
	A wonderful write Joe, alot of heart in just a few lines. Henry Respond To This Comment

	Comment By: painandlove on July 19, 2005 09:56:55 PM	Report
	great write there you are a true inspration!! Respond To This Comment

	Comment By: joey on July 19, 2005 04:15:38 PM	Report
	Wow very good poem I like it alot great job Respond To This Comment

	Comment By: Tracy Fletcher on July 19, 2005 03:42:59 PM	Report
	Sound great! I'm ready whenever you are, my bags are already packed. Your Friend..........Tracy Respond To This Comment

	Comment By: She Whispers on July 19, 2005 12:06:48 PM	Report
	JOE, SOUNDS LIKE A WONDERFUL PLACE TO GO...WE ALL NEED THIS PLACE IN OUR LIVES.. HUGS ~ SHE Respond To This Comment

	Comment By: Glata on July 19, 2005 11:25:56 AM	Report
	You lift the burden weighing me And place a smile on my weary face My days seem brighter, easier to bear As misery is put in its place The frown of worry I once wore Has gone without a trace The only thing that i wear now Is this smile upon my face I'm reaching now for your loving hand You've lifted all the gloom Your caring, loving, giving heart Leaves misery without a room Thank you so much, Joe, for having such a big heart! Hugs...Glata Respond To This Comment

	Comment By: hiddendragon on July 19, 2005 11:16:11 AM	Report
	Charming and delightful Joe! Best wishes, Dragon~ Respond To This Comment