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Author Name: Freeangle girl 2 Comments
Date Added: August 18, 2005 06:08:18 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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First Frost

A girl is freezin in a telephone booth,

huddled in her flimsy coat,

her face stained by tears

and smeared wif lipskick.

She breathes on thin lil fingers.

Fingers like ice.Glass beads in her ears.

She has to bet her way back down alone

down the icy street.

First frost. A beginning of losses the first frost of telephone.

It is the start of winter glittering on her cheeks.

The first frost of having been hurt.

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Comment By: FreeScarlett. on August 28, 2005 11:58:09 AM Report
that is a beautiful poem... it has so much meaning behind it...
and i love it too the glitter that glitter's in my heart thanks for the wonderfull reads..

vaGrant*worthlessrose.
Comment By: PremiumRoger Bacon on August 18, 2005 10:32:18 AM Report
I like how this all comes together with the twist at the end.




 


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