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Author Name: FreeTheBagLady 61 Comments
Date Added: August 23, 2005 00:08:08 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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If I could love but once....

If I could love, but once.....


If I could love, but once,
'tis you that comes to mind.
You are a true, real man,
one of the special kind...

With loving poetry,
so flowing in your veins.
Prose, that's rich in texture,
heartfelt words it contains...

Your awareness of Love,
beckons my ailing heart.
I've loved you, as you know,
right from the very start...

Words float within my Soul,
written from magic pen.
Gift me with the answer,
That you are mine again...

Holding hands at seashore,
as the Sun melts away.
Counting stars at twilight,
gathering a bouquet...

Yearning for Chardonnay
in soft, warm candlelight.
Holding you in my arms,
throughout the moonlit night.

Breathing in your essence,
tasting your sweetened lips.
Wanting to surrender,
to touch of fingertips...

Craving your passion needs,
as you in turn,  crave mine.
Completing our true needs,
in ecstacy devine...

Let this Lady Poet,
have her sweet dreams come true,
If I could love,  but once,
please Love,  let it be you...

Author's Notes:

Love of someone........

(The midi playing, "into the mist",
courtesy of http://www.norbry.net/)

(The Pic, "Pink Rose",
courtesy of http://www.claritysolutions.co.nz/)

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Comments:
Comment By: FreeSteve on June 28, 2010 10:57:51 AM Report

A beautiful write and well deserving of an award!


Comment By: FreeAndrew on November 16, 2009 12:12:19 PM Report
Wow - I know this has been posted for some time now - but 64 comments? Never seen anything come close - and it's clear why there is so much interest (and also the award).  You set the bar high, not only in your writing but in your expectations of that perfect love.
Comment By: FreeTinkerBelle on October 28, 2009 09:43:30 AM Report
Wow! What a wonderful poem so beautiful. well deserving of an award
Comment By: FreeLORETTA PITILLI on September 5, 2009 08:56:25 PM Report

"If I Could Love But Once"   so utterly genuine and true.  Every breath you speak of touches my heart.  So warm and so tender.  So deserving of an award.  God Bless You Margaret.  You are incredible.

Comment By: TrialSarah on September 2, 2009 11:35:00 AM Report
Wow! What a wonderful write! Where was I those days?
Comment By: FreeBlack on September 1, 2009 03:33:00 PM Report
I entirely understand what you mean now... And all it took was one read of this beautiful poem. I would've been complaining that it deserves an award had it not already had one. Brilliantly penned. I just learned a thing or two.

Comment By: FreeSilkinTears on August 28, 2009 11:56:54 PM Report
I'm feeling the love all over. What a beautiful write...well deserving of an award.
Helen

Comment By: Freejoey on August 20, 2009 05:03:00 PM Report
An absolutely beautiful poem very heart felt.
Congrats on the award

Comment By: Freeabby on April 26, 2009 10:17:47 PM Report
I read this again and again and Iam enthralled

by the sheer beauty of the lines, pictures and passion.

Welldone dear.

Comment By: FreeMoon Fairy on April 12, 2009 04:22:49 AM Report
Truly a favorite write because you carry us along with you dear lady~The love
you express just draws us close and captivates our hearts.
Beautiful~beautiful write--
Hugs,
*)Moon Fairy *wishing on a star for her dear friend, The Bag Lady*


Comment By: Freenoah count on March 26, 2009 01:33:30 AM Report
I don't know much 'bout history, nor love, but apparently you do. 
Comment By: Freenoah count on March 26, 2009 01:31:37 AM Report

Comment By: FreeRin Marie on July 13, 2007 09:49:32 PM Report
This is so heartfelt....its beautiful. Well deserved award indeed.

Love, Rin
Comment By: FreeLast Temple Knight on October 10, 2006 08:44:50 PM Report
Beautiful and heart touching... love is a powerful feeling...
Comment By: FreeBruce A. Peaslee on September 26, 2006 07:11:30 PM Report
Margaret-  This is an enchanting poetic melody,  I really enjoy the way it flows and the beautiful sentiment it expresses.

 

---Poetrydad---

Comment By: FreeLeonard Wilson on September 17, 2006 06:45:08 PM Report
This is so lovely, Magaret..This deserved to be on top of the winner's list..Belated Happy Birthday, kid...Love ya...DM
Comment By: FreeJoe Petro on September 7, 2006 08:26:27 AM Report
There is beautiful, beautiful love in the world and it resides in the heart of a poet. A belated congratulations. jp
Comment By: FreeHanane on September 6, 2006 05:02:13 AM Report
we've all make such a wish, but that nightmarish reality is breaking everything nice. it does'nt give all that you long for. you did remind me of Browning's love, that love lifed in Florence,

 

How Do I love Thee, Let me count the ways

so you, at least, you could count your own ways.

Thx for this piece of romanticisme, I really like it

Comment By: FreeTracy Fletcher on July 12, 2006 07:50:33 PM Report
Margaret,
Congratulations on winning a Featured Poem Award for this very beautifully written work of art.
Tracy

Comment By: FreeJeff on July 12, 2006 01:53:59 PM Report
Margaret, I loved this the first time I read it....

I love it again....fresh as new.

Congratulations my dear friend, you deserved all the awards this site could give out.

Jeff

Comment By: FreeJillian K. Alexis on July 12, 2006 12:10:21 PM Report
Oh ~STARLIGHT~, this is beautifully penned. Of course, I wouldn't expect any less from u. I am so happy for u that u won the featured poem award. U truly deserved it...Hugz...~SUNSHINE~
Comment By: FreeCynthia Jones on July 11, 2006 06:53:39 PM Report

Congrats for your muchly deserved award. *S* Wind Whisperer


Comment By: FreeThe Mystic Poet on July 11, 2006 04:21:36 PM Report
Congrats! Very well done.
Comment By: FreeRoger Bacon on July 10, 2006 11:00:08 AM Report
This poem just keeps getting better.  Its been almost a year since I first read this and it takes my breath away each time!
Comment By: PremiumGlata on July 10, 2006 07:21:47 AM Report
Dear, dear Margaret...

This is so very deserving of this award...and many more! Beautiful work, as always...You always touch the very depths of my heart with your writes...and this one is absolutely stunning!

Congrats again../

and big hugs to you!!

Glata

Comment By: FreeCindy Bendel on July 9, 2006 09:52:51 PM Report
Margaret...I am in awe of such a beautiful and touching write. Very deserving of this award!!!

 

Going to my faves!

 

Love, Cindy

Comment By: ModeratorLady Dragonwyck on July 9, 2006 06:40:23 PM Report

Margaret:  oh this is delightful.  Such romance..............


Congratulations on your Feature Poem Award....


Lady D


 


Comment By: PremiumGlata on May 17, 2006 04:01:37 PM Report
Heartfelt and full of longing, Margaret...done as only you can do. Beautiful sentiments...and intense!
May your heart's prayer be answered.
Love to you!
Gigi
Comment By: FreeDairine Bennett on May 15, 2006 05:48:37 PM Report
this is lovely...it's great. x x x x
Comment By: Freelilac on January 19, 2006 12:45:59 AM Report
this gave me goosebumps! it is gorgeous in every way! this poem is a jewel in your crown!
Comment By: FreeMichael on November 1, 2005 09:16:32 PM Report
The only thing I know of poetry is how it makes me feel…
This was beautiful…

Comment By: FreeAlfred Berggren on October 12, 2005 08:02:18 PM Report
A love poem that melts my heart. Wonderful poetry.
Comment By: FreeVictoria on October 6, 2005 10:30:03 PM Report
WoW! So beautiful! Bravo!
Comment By: Freejoia on September 29, 2005 01:36:53 PM Report
Beautiful, inspiring, and some dreams come true. I wish this one for you Lady Margaret. joia
Comment By: AdminRichardM on September 24, 2005 12:18:01 AM Report
This is just so beautiful. So warm and touching. Lifts ones' spirits to know love can be imagined like this. May your dreams come true!
Rich
Comment By: FreeJennifer on September 20, 2005 10:58:02 PM Report
This is breath-taking. Very elegant!!!!!! Each word captivates me!!! this is a sweet sweet love poem!!!
Jen
Comment By: PremiumMary Lou Allen on September 15, 2005 04:10:17 PM Report
This is absolutely gorgeous. It takes my breath away. I'm envious. It is the sweetest of love poems, Margaret, and I wish I'd written it. ML
Comment By: FreeLubaina on September 9, 2005 01:37:38 PM Report
This poem is so beautiful and real.
I really enjoyed these words from your "soft warm puddle of bliss"!fantastic poem.Your poemS are always splendid and this one is no exception.
Lubs.
Comment By: on September 9, 2005 06:41:10 AM Report
A sweet, stunning write from a beautiful lady...wonderful!
LGBB
Comment By: FreeTracy Fletcher on September 8, 2005 10:02:46 PM Report
Margaret, This is absolutely breathe taking, to have someone fall in love again. It can happen it happened for Fletch and I. We fell in love with each other all over again and are now stronger and more in love than we ever were.
Yours...............Tracy
Comment By: ModeratorHenry M. on September 7, 2005 05:19:29 PM Report
This is a beautiful poemthat wishes are made from, to have a yearning for a love such as this makes me want to go out on a starlit night and wish upon every one I see so that I may be granted a love such as this. Beautifully written and expressed Margaret. Henry
Comment By: FreeJillian K. Alexis on September 6, 2005 01:21:55 AM Report
This is beautiful ~STARLIGHT~. I wanted to show my daughter Katie, who is 13 and also writes poetry and short stories...she is very talented...some of your' work. I told her u were the best Poetess I have ever encountered. She said this poem is beautiful, and I agree with her completely. I love the song and pic. Hug...~SUNSHINE~...AKA...Jillian, enjoying a very good friends words.
Comment By: FreeAndy on September 2, 2005 09:39:48 AM Report
This is a beautiful poem! You did a wonderful job with it!
Comment By: FreeAlison Storm Wolf on September 2, 2005 09:25:10 AM Report
This poem has made me cry with the delicate beauty of it. Delicate..yes...passionate in its portrayal of what it means to really LOVE with all your heart. Wonderful wonderful wonderful...now you've made my mascara run!!!
Into favs!!!
Ali xxx
Comment By: FreeDamon D. Brewer on September 2, 2005 03:53:24 AM Report
Beautifully well written piece that you have here my friend. What more can I say? I love it from beginning to end.
Damon
Comment By: Freejudy on August 30, 2005 09:37:15 PM Report
Absolutely breathtaking, beautifully written. I loved this wonderful poem.

Judy :o)
Comment By: FreeSharon Jorcil James on August 29, 2005 08:59:50 PM Report
Oh my goodness Margaret...this is beautiful beyond words my friend!!
Bravo! Bravo!! Bravo!!! Indeed you are a talented poet.

Sharon JJ
Comment By: FreeMary F. Charest on August 28, 2005 09:10:14 PM Report
Too beautiful for words, my friend.
Mary
Comment By: FreeBarbara Demasson on August 26, 2005 07:52:34 PM Report
Perhaps it is the way a poet opens his heart...or hers...that makes them so irresistible. Perhaps...it is the way the words entice one another as they reveal our hearts. I have no real answers...only speculation...but one thing I know for certain...you, my lady...are one of the best.

Incredible!! Stirring!! Heartfelt!!!Passionate!!! Excellent!!!

~Barbara~
Comment By: FreeCynthia Jones on August 26, 2005 09:27:49 AM Report
Oh, this is a delightful read Margaret. Beautifully penned my friend. *S* Wind Whisperer
Comment By: FreeDarkness Rides This Night on August 26, 2005 08:43:20 AM Report
Love is something that is sometimes as alusive as the sun on a rainy day..! But when your in it..! You are complete..! A beautiful piece my friend..!
Comment By: Freepainandlove on August 26, 2005 12:40:51 AM Report
I think this is so lovely...you are turely a great writter. I am glad that I was able to read this.
Comment By: FreeRoger Bacon on August 25, 2005 09:32:12 PM Report
Wow. I'm speechless over this poem. I had to read and reread in order for my thoughts to regroup, as they were so overwhelmed for a few moments. It's truly remarkable how you keep raising that bar with each new write and answer it with something even more inspiring.
Comment By: FreeSamantha Firefly on August 24, 2005 06:23:03 AM Report
This is so beautiful, Margaret. Great love poem.
Samantha.
Comment By: FreeJeff on August 23, 2005 01:36:26 PM Report
Stunning....
What a lucky man this poem is written for.
I hope he knows of your desires.

Jeff > Who thinks the Bag Lady might possiblely be the perfect woman.
Comment By: PremiumJoe McNinney on August 23, 2005 09:12:12 AM Report
This is another incredible write Margaret, romantic and very loving indeed! Joe
Comment By: Freehiddendragon on August 23, 2005 08:37:34 AM Report
Well, my dear lady, you sure can weave one beautiful love poem~

This is warm and heartfelt...sends the readers imaginations to floating on the clouds, wrapped in a warm and fuzzy gauze...sigh...LOVELY, my friend, very lovely.

Best wishes,
Dragon~
Comment By: FreePaul Peter McLean on August 23, 2005 07:40:43 AM Report
This is a lovely poem Margaret, full of romance and sensuality. I like the rhythm of the verses; and that you mention the important part poetry plays in the ways of love. Well done.
Comment By: Freeb doneff on August 23, 2005 06:55:40 AM Report
From the rose, to the delicate pink color, to the written word, this reeks of love and endearment! Bag Lady, you may consider yourself beyond hope, lol,, you have been bitten,..very romantic write here, and a dellight to read! Barbie
Comment By: PremiumLindaM on August 23, 2005 01:27:25 AM Report
Soft, loving. sensual and just beautiful.
This is so lovely and this pic is beautiful too.
Linda
Comment By: PremiumShe Whispers on August 23, 2005 01:00:42 AM Report
DEAR LADY,
THE HEART OF A LADY POET.. JUST TO LOVE HIM AGAIN???.. TO LOVE THE SAME MAN >>> HE KNOWS OUR WEAKNESS >>> THIS IS BEAUTIFUL LADY AS PURE AS YOUR HEART ... WE ALL NEED LOVE .. YOUR HEART IS ON THIS POEM... HUGS ~ SHE




 


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