Deeper by Keri

		Author Name: alwayskeri	5 Comments
		Date Added: August 25, 2005 23:08:23	Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Deeper

Every second of every day,
As time whiles the light away,
All I think about is you,
Each thought great, each thought new.

Night brings smiles and laughter,
Talks that last till the morning after,
Cannot calm my racing heart,
In my life, you're the greatest part.

Each new day brings so much,
I never imagined anything such,
I know that you know it's true,
I'm falling deeper in love with you!

-Keri
8-25-05

Author's Notes:

Struggling to write something worthy of JD! "Sweetest Dreams" has topped me out.

I love you, JD!

Tienes mi corazon, mi amor. :)

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Comments:

	Comment By: Christa Carroll on September 27, 2005 12:26:40 AM	Report
	Awe! That so perfectly describes being in love that it makes me smile! I've been trying to think of how to write a "happy love poem" and I just haven't managed to get anything productive! You did such a good job, thanks for sharing! I love the rhymes and the simplicity of it all! -Christa Respond To This Comment

	Comment By: Henry M. on September 7, 2005 11:44:35 AM	Report
	I disagree Keri, I think you managed to squeeze more out of the tap. This is more of what you feel, whether the words come hard or easy, as long as it's from your heart, that's what matters and from what I see I'd say J.D. is one lucky guy to have captured your heart. Henry Respond To This Comment

	Comment By: Damon D. Brewer on August 28, 2005 03:04:12 PM	Report
	Excellently written! Damon Respond To This Comment

	Comment By: The Bag Lady on August 26, 2005 11:51:15 AM	Report
	Simply lovely, Keri~ The full and embracing love woven into your lines, brings the reader to feel true love~! Margaret, the bag lady Respond To This Comment

	Comment By: b doneff on August 26, 2005 09:46:09 AM	Report
	I second that motion JD!! Hope all is well with you sweets, and loved the write Hon...Auntie B.. Respond To This Comment