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Author Name: Premiummom11159 12 Comments
Date Added: September 06, 2005 13:09:38 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Majestic Lake

I sit by the lake listening to natures monologue, so serene
I feel the cool breeze brush across my face,  feeling like a queen
I look at the beautiful picture in front of me, so majestic blue
Water ripples with such calmness, picture perfect to view.

The feelings I get when I look across the lake of magical  arrays
Viewing the extreme colors, of the beautiful sun setting in the haze
A view that subsides into the darkness of the night
But the effect on me will remain forever past the light

You will never hear this Majestic Blue lake cry with pain
For God has given it such beauty, peacefulness it has obtained
The creatures within this lake have Gods' promise of peace
Flying high above are wild ducks, and many geese

As I inhale one more time I grab the halter to my horse
I prepare to ride off  in the sunset of course
Before I go I look once more into the Majestic Lake
And promise I waiver to ever forsake

I now leave this place in such wonderful hands
God protects this lake, watches over the land
To preserve it so I may return one day soon
To view its beauty, underneath the  sky lit moon.

Author's Notes:

These are the words Jillian gave me to use from the words bank they have been the most challenging words yet but I managed to keep them in the nature Category and it was hared to do Thanks for the challenge Jillian                 

Monologue--
picture
feelings
blue
pain
Subside--
Halter--
Stomp--
Extreme--
 waiver

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Comments:
Comment By: FreeJennifer on July 2, 2008 12:57:28 PM Report
Such a beautiful poem. I enjoyed reading it.

Lovely poem and the picture you so goes well with the poem.

 

Jennifer.

Comment By: PremiumShe Whispers on June 4, 2008 08:32:06 AM Report
Cathy,
 Goodness I did enjoy this astonishing poem... Your such a great poet lady so glad your back with us...
 Oh, today Is Alison Storm Wold birthday I posted a poem for her..(( Smiless  she is a great friend of us all,, Hugs ~ She Whispers


Comment By: FreeSamuel E. Stone on April 21, 2008 01:42:51 PM Report
A well written piece, I enjoyed reading it...

Wishing you well....

Sam

Comment By: PremiumGlata on December 29, 2005 05:29:22 PM Report
Wow, the picture took my breath away! How I'd love to be there...
Lovely write, too!
Hugs...
Glata
Comment By: FreeCynthia Jones on December 13, 2005 10:30:30 PM Report
WOW! ~grabbing a hot french vanilla coffee and taking in the sights~ Well penned Cathy. *S* Wind Whisperer
Comment By: FreeSavanahB on November 7, 2005 08:43:04 PM Report
ummmm...hand me a sammich before you go, Cathy. I think I'll just sit here with you and relax for a bit. Such a peaceful write in such troubled times. Wonderful - Jude
Comment By: FreeH. Louise on October 1, 2005 04:34:41 AM Report
This is a great write.
Such beautiful imagery. It painted a picture in my head.
Very well written.
Keep up the great work ^_^
xHannahx
Comment By: PremiumJoe McNinney on September 19, 2005 06:59:39 PM Report
I just love these WB poems, terrific write Cathy, Joe
Comment By: FreeEdward Kent on September 19, 2005 12:33:24 PM Report
this a beautiful discriptive poem ,I loved it Cathy, but I like all yours ,Hugs Eddy
Comment By: AdminRichardM on September 8, 2005 12:05:30 AM Report
Your words grace the picture, the description crystal clear. Just wonderful, Cathy. I think my blood pressure dropped a few points as you took me with this beautiful lake, thanks!
Rich
Comment By: on September 6, 2005 03:17:10 PM Report
Cathy~
Oh what a beautifully,serene write. Makes me wish I was overlooking a majestic lake right now.*sigh*..
Your write is wonderful,thank you!
(*Moon~
Comment By: FreeSamantha Firefly on September 6, 2005 01:57:26 PM Report
This is beautiful and so peaceful. Awesome write.
Samantha.




 


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