Twinkle, Twinkle Little Star (Fractured Nursey Rhyme) by Cynthia Jones

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		Date Added: September 12, 2005 21:09:29	Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Twinkle, Twinkle Little Star (Fractured Nursey Rhyme)

Twinkle, twinkle little star
My you are out there quite far,
Come down here, shine your light on my face
I'm in a band, I play the bass.

Twinkle, twinkle little star
You know you are, quite bizarre,
Your bright light is blinding me
Dim down a little bit, before you drive me batty.

Twinkle, twinkle little star
Let me play my bass guitar,
We'll be playing some other day
Now you can get, just go away.

Twinkle, twinkle little star
You're the brighest star by far,
Come down here and join my band
We be rockin' across this great land.

Sept.12/2005

Author's Notes:

I know, this one is stupid, or childish. I'm just trying new ideas.

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	Comment By: Karen Lowrey on December 25, 2007 02:37:00 PM	Report
	I enjoyed reading your the rhythmic rhythm of "Twinkle, twinkle little star." I do not believe it is stupid, nor childish! I believe you have quite fun and cleverness in writing the verses to create your own unique style of nursery rhyme. The rhythm is lively and the tone is cute keep up with your writing skills and you will have no trouble what so ever "rockin' across this great land." Respond To This Comment

	Comment By: Robert Neal on November 5, 2005 09:50:24 PM	Report
	Well, I for one enjoyed this and I encourage you to embrace your "childishness". It can be said that once all of our childlike attributes have faded that we have completely grown up ... and after completely growing up all that is left ... is growing old. Who in the Hell wants that ? :) Respond To This Comment

	Comment By: Tracy Fletcher on September 13, 2005 02:11:32 PM	Report
	Everyone needs a time in life that we can just be childish or act stupid. Life can not always be serious! I like this cute little write. Love Ya............Tracy Respond To This Comment

	Comment By: She Whispers on September 13, 2005 12:15:31 AM	Report
	WELL WE ALL GET A LITTLE SILLY SOME TIMES.. ALWAYS ~ SHE Respond To This Comment