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Author Name: PremiumPelagic Mind 3 Comments
Date Added: October 08, 2005 09:10:14 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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My Flag

My  Flag      (A rhyming poem)

 

Stale mists from cities rise

Polluting earths’ once virgin skies

Brown now all the trees are gone

From the once green Amazon

Black tarmac over earths’ green floor

To facilitate machines of war

And all the money that we earn

Cannot replace the trees we burn

Cows now graze where forests stood

Farting methane and creating mud

To feed the worlds’ fat-rich bellies

So burgers with fries cost just pennies

So my flag is green just like the trees

With bands of blue for sky and seas

And gold just like the morning sun

When life was new and we’d just begun

So come and rally to this flag

Before the earth’s just molten slag

Author's Notes:

David's comment below is a reasonable criticism of my original comment in "about this poem"...It shows that "shooting from the hip can occasionally lead to stray bullets" and I agree my comment was misleading on the issue of methane "directly" damaging the ozone layer. David has given a better account of that below...

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Comment By: FreeN.M.Sodergran on September 1, 2006 01:47:56 AM Report
Nice concept, excellently executed and interesting thoughts!  Really liked your flag ;)
Cheers!  Aeth

Comment By: PremiumDavid Turner on October 12, 2005 07:39:53 AM Report
My whole-hearted support to the appeal, but I feel the piece is just too polemical and points would be made better with a subtler approach.
Some quibbles about the Science in this.

1) It is not methane but chlorohydrocarbons that affect the ozene layer.
Methane emmissions are dangerous because they it is a greenhouse gas a nd contributes to global warming howver it is not really at all certain that methane levels are rising - unlike CO2. Methane is the natural by product from all organic decay. All forests produce CO2 and methane as part of their natural cycle. Increasing the size of forests will not of itself reduce global warming. What is necessary is to increase the areas of anaerobic decay of plant material like wood - i.e. create a permanent carbon sink as in the coal seams or peat bogs.
The worst affect of increased meat production - particularly beef is that foods that could be used to feed people are fed to cows and produce only one tenth of the nutrional value from beef as from grain.
Most of the Worlds oxygen is produced by diatoms in the Oceans. Destroying tropical forests will not lead to oxygen starvation of the planet - in any case the atmosphere is a system in dynamic equilibrium and oxygen levels cannot be varied greatly - Le Chatliers theorem.
The same is really true of CO2 levels only the mechanism to restore them to a stable level will probably involve a mass extinction event and humans will go in it.

Read James Lovelock's book, `Gaia'

http://www.ecolo.org/lovelock/

David
Comment By: FreeMary on October 8, 2005 12:24:26 PM Report
wow this was a very powerful ad intense write and im sorry that u cant sollute ur on flag!!!thats important when u cant sullute ur flag
mary




 


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