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Author Name: FreeAnna Cellmer 4 Comments
Date Added: November 01, 2005 02:11:21 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Love creation
I've learnt how to
Not hide of this
What I miss

I've seen this
In my heart
What I lack

I've built
This world
Which can be
The essence to live

And then you came
To show me
What the love is

And then you filled
This open dream
I use to live in

To make it real

The guest of mine
Arrived and now
I have to learn
How to share this world
I've built

To create the new dream
About you and me
To live and to feel
The new space
And the new reality
In you
In me
In the place
Within

To make our hearts
So happy and shined
Just to make us alive
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeBruce A. Peaslee on November 4, 2005 08:14:59 AM Report
Anna- Welcome to Creative Poems. I enjoy the subject of this work; how a special person can,at times,complete a dream. Well done.

---Poetrydad---
Comment By: FreeMoon Fairy on November 4, 2005 03:59:43 AM Report
Lovely, emotional poetry Anna~
Good write!
(*Moon~
Comment By: FreeShruti on November 3, 2005 09:24:55 AM Report
Where do I start? All words of praise seem to sound so empty compared to what I feel. This is so much of my idea and has elements of myself in it. The true idea of poetry is to lead one to themselves, and you've accomplished that. Hail!
Comment By: FreeHeike on November 1, 2005 09:13:41 AM Report
This poem is a lovely creation, Anna :-).
You seem to be a lucky girl.
Best wishes,
~Heike





 


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