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Author Name: FreeAnna Cellmer 2 Comments
Date Added: November 09, 2005 04:11:15 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Patient girl

Patient girl
Is waiting for a man
To come
But she can't be so alone
So she is adored
At this time by someone special too
Who wants to take her heart and soul
But she doesn't know what to do
She knows that she loves
The man who
Is absent so often
and she needs more daily care
so she lets another came
To her mind and heart too
What to do
What to do
Does she lost
His this way?
Does she stay alone
At the end?
I don't know
But I want
You
I want you the most
But you can't be by my side
All the time
You are too busy for that
So, I have to do something
With this free time
To not die
To stay alive
For you
Caring lover
Is this
What she needs the most
But he can't come
To her world again
He is silent
He is impossible man
But the best for her

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Comments:
Comment By: FreeBruce A. Peaslee on November 10, 2005 07:07:01 AM Report
Anna - An all too familiar predicament in this world today, A
man wrapped up in his work-a-day world and his lady love in deep need of his presence. That another is ready to take advantage of this absence is a real problem. Stand firm in your love and patiently work to change the situation; It will be worth it all in the end. Thought provoking Anna.

---Poetrydad---











Comment By: Freeb doneff on November 9, 2005 08:16:09 AM Report
I have found it is easier to pretend you are a nun...or at least live like one, far too complicated for this gal! Nice write though, Barbie




 


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