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Author Name: Premiumwordsworthswords 19 Comments
Date Added: February 27, 2006 19:02:12 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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MY DREAM LAST NIGHT
I had a dream last night,
we were walking on the beach sand,
We were together under the moonlight,
holding on to one another's hand.

We walked on and on,
watched the waves hit the shore,
all of our troubles were gone,
and we were safe and secure.

We talked about us,
and the way we wanted things to be,
I confessed my love to you,
and you confessed your love to me.

I then took you in my arms,
and I carried you away,
My dream then ended,
and I awoke to a new day.
Author's Notes:
This is a repost from last year. I originally wrote this about 8 years ago after an ex and I actually took a walk on the beach. As always, thank you for your time, Joe
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Comments:
Comment By: Freeblackivorykeys on August 4, 2006 11:51:32 PM Report
I loved this. It flows to nicely... I can almost hear the waves and feel the sand between my toes!


Comment By: FreeDairine Bennett on April 12, 2006 07:55:35 PM Report
oh this is so great. for a moment there i thought i could see the waves too!! this is sweet and so beautiful! x x x x x x x
Comment By: FreeVanessa Cush on April 7, 2006 03:14:59 PM Report
this is beautifully written and i understand the dream sequence. i love your work.
Comment By: FreeLori on March 11, 2006 03:36:08 PM Report
Walking on the beach is so peaceful and its definitely an awesome place to be with the one you love even if its just a dream. I enjoy reading your poems! They are very moving.

Lori---<---<@
Comment By: FreeCheryl Greenwell on March 7, 2006 10:46:25 PM Report
always love to walk on the beach....great poem joe...C
Comment By: FreeS on March 5, 2006 11:34:09 PM Report
great poem short and sweet
Comment By: PremiumPaul on March 5, 2006 04:20:24 PM Report
I enjoyed this very much - The way my dreams work usually is that I would pick her up in my arms and I would look into her eyes and realize that she was some mutant swamp-monster!! lol
Paul
Comment By: FreeKatherine on March 1, 2006 07:31:26 PM Report
Awww I love it! I'm always a sucker for romance on the beach! Haha. I don't know I gues the tides just get the best of me! Hell your inspiring me to write a new poem of my own! Thanks for posting!!!! and much love!!!
Comment By: FreeKatherine on March 1, 2006 07:30:59 PM Report

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Comment By: FreeKatherine on March 1, 2006 07:30:04 PM Report
Awww I love it! I'm always a sucker for romance on the beach! Haha. I don't know I gues the tides just get the best of me! Hell your inspiring me to write a new poem of my own! Thanks again and much love!!!
Comment By: FreePhoenix on March 1, 2006 02:41:55 PM Report
Sounds like a wonderful dream. I wish I could remember mine because of it. T.T
lol, anyways, it's still an awesome poem, repost or not.
~Michael
Comment By: PremiumGlata on February 28, 2006 09:54:27 AM Report
An older one or not, it's still very beautiful! You have certainly earned the title, "McRomeo" Lol!
Hugs!!
Glata
Comment By: FreeGraham Jones on February 28, 2006 03:56:45 AM Report
If only you could dream to order, I'd order one like this every night.
Comment By: PremiumShe Whispers on February 27, 2006 11:11:03 PM Report
JOE, THE DREAMS WE ALL HAVE .. ARE A PART OF LIFE.. TO WALK ON BEACH IS SO SOOTHING.. GREAT POEM.. ALWAYS ~ SHE
Comment By: Freeb doneff on February 27, 2006 10:00:13 PM Report
I love beaches,they have always goven me a wonderful mood for thinking. So peaceful and the scenery just breathtaking. Toss in a little love, and yep, you have the perfect dream~~ very pretty Romeo..Barbie
Comment By: FreeAngel on February 27, 2006 09:13:51 PM Report
Dreams can be so beautiful sugar. Wonderful write Joe swept away on a cloud

Love Angelxx
Comment By: FreeAngel on February 27, 2006 09:13:48 PM Report
Dreams can be so beautiful sugar. Wonderful write Joe swept away on a cloud

Love Angelxx
Comment By: Freepainandlove on February 27, 2006 07:32:44 PM Report
Nice repost! I enjoyed it.




 


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