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Comment By:  Angelface on January 16, 2009 01:52:01 PM |
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Congrads on the award. This was a AWESOME piece of art. Keep up the wonderfyl work! Many blessings to ya.
Angelface
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Comment By:  Moon Fairy on December 2, 2008 03:44:00 PM |
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Way to go Aaron! Indeed a very good write, I enjoyed every line and image.
Congratulations!
~Tracie
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Comment By:  Lady Dragonwyck on December 1, 2008 05:30:51 PM |
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aaron: super congratulations on this excellent write, so deserving of the Feature Poem Award.
Lady Dragonwyck
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Comment By: She Whispers on November 21, 2008 01:05:26 PM |
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Yet another wonderful amazing poem...
Coffee Lovers will go to any length...
Watching people can be such fun.
body language is worth its weight in Gold..
~ She Whispers
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Comment By: Dairine Bennett on June 26, 2006 07:38:14 PM |
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True...and God, Starbucks love it! ! ! x x x x
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Comment By: Barbara Demasson on May 12, 2006 12:38:47 AM |
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You can tell a lot about people at a glance. We tend to have our own mental filing cabinet and sort them accordingly.
This is amazing! Your talent shines! Excellent penning! =))
~Barbara~
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Comment By: jag on April 20, 2006 11:44:08 PM |
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Good observational poem thoroughly enjoyed it
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Comment By: Cynthia Jones on April 18, 2006 05:06:51 AM |
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Interesting write Aaron. Nice flow. :o) *S* Wind Whisperer
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Comment By: Pamela A. Lamppa on April 15, 2006 08:10:44 AM |
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Busta the Pit Bull - caught me. So much in a small space. Exceptionally visual BIG CITY, rush rush rush. No tree. No grass. No flower. But ages of steps walked to that coffee shop. Very well done. I like this style. Your short crisp lines make these visuals work very well. A pleasure to read. ~Pam
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Comment By: Rob Sparks on April 14, 2006 05:26:00 PM |
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amazing picture painted with words... nice work
rOb
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Comment By: Heidi Campbell on April 7, 2006 02:44:56 PM |
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I've done this before..this is neat..where I live now...there's nothing like this to watch..very quiet atmosphere here..but I have been in times where I just sit and watch..I find out you learn more that way...great write!!
Heidi
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Comment By: Wide Awake on April 1, 2006 12:57:35 PM |
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Sorry for the coffee shop reference...I was looking at the titles before reading...and it feels just like that...in a coffee shop, or on a park bench, just outside the coffee shop perhaps :)
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Comment By: Wide Awake on April 1, 2006 12:55:01 PM |
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:) I like the way you ended this.
This is so very unique...in its clips...
like flicking through the stations on a tv....
The form is very much like our present day life...add society we have become.
But this works very well in a poem, as art.
I love pioneering of this sort.
Well presented afternoon at the coffee shop indeed~
Best wishes,
Pamela
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Comment By: Roger Bacon on March 30, 2006 10:02:10 PM |
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Here's my two cent opinion: Enjoyed your write. Watching people can be a creative exercise every now and then.
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Comment By: Cindy Bendel on March 27, 2006 11:10:51 PM |
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I see you are a people watcher and lover of coffee.....What a wonderful way to experience free entertainment. Your writing is unique and fun to read.
Cindy
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