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Comment By:  guest_writer on June 7, 2011 05:42:41 AM |
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this sonnet is beautifully written. i like it. and i like the title so much!
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| Comment By: Michael Salyers on September 1, 2010 01:46:01 PM |
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Very good for a 1st. try. I am very impressed. He was a fool for letting you slip away.... His loss ONLY!
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Comment By:  Linda Jo on February 24, 2010 06:53:28 PM |
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the sonnet was born to express such love...you have captured the true feeling of a sonnet. I've found them to be quite a challenge but your words seem to flow with great ease. my favorite lines, "with the power of persistence for you to see me" but "like always, it's not me, the one you see"
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| Comment By: FLETCHER on June 1, 2009 11:48:34 AM |
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Heartfelt and Creative
You are so gifted.
Fletch
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| Comment By: Mary on December 8, 2008 10:10:46 AM |
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wow what a wonderful sonnet very well described i completey can relate to what you feel.
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| Comment By: Barbara Demasson on May 26, 2008 01:10:32 PM |
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I've snuck into the archives hun and found this heartfelt piece. I know this feeling--when doubt and loss bully a person until they don't know what was even real or imagined anymore. The search for "loving meadows" goes on and because this poem was written in 2006 I'm going to joke with you about it. Dear one, let's hope our "loving meadows" isn't a bloody retirement home. =))
~Barbara~ *sending hugz your way*
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| Comment By: Steve on May 22, 2008 06:54:11 PM |
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A beautiful poem by someone with a tender heart.
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| Comment By: krista on December 20, 2006 01:59:52 PM |
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very well written! good job!, bravo keep up the good work! :)
~krista
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| Comment By: Crystal on December 15, 2006 01:46:32 AM |
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very well written keep up the great work
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| Comment By: Last Temple Knight on December 8, 2006 12:23:33 PM |
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Beautiful and heartfelt tenderness...
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| Comment By: leahlopez on November 16, 2006 04:16:25 PM |
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Well done Adri. X Not bad for your first try. "hugs"
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| Comment By: Goliath Assassin on October 5, 2006 12:36:01 PM |
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Chasing all of by broken shadows, exploiting all my mortal fears.... Now that's down deep, Adri. You got some Goth metal flowing through your veins or what? Haha!
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| Comment By: Glata on September 6, 2006 09:16:08 AM |
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NICE one...I felt every line clear to my toes...
Beautiful job, dear...
Hugs
Glata
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| Comment By: Craig David Dawson on September 5, 2006 02:24:39 PM |
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its not too bad..you did well my young apprentice..lol.
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| Comment By: Jonathan Ivy on August 2, 2006 05:41:32 AM |
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With my heart still bleeding tears
what a beautiful line
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| Comment By: Ilze on July 18, 2006 03:44:32 PM |
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Very powerful and wonderful one! Very well written.
We are too afraid to let out true emtions to be seen, and in nowadays too much hiding our real selves inside.
I believe it is better to love and perhaps have your heart broken, than to don't know what love really is.
Namaste!
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| Comment By: Leonard Wilson on July 18, 2006 01:38:44 AM |
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Everything's better with a good sonnet on it..This is a fine one..What's that spear shakin' palooka have that you don't have, outside of a plot of ground, I mean...len
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| Comment By: Mujtaba H Zaidi on June 11, 2006 02:23:41 AM |
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This piece of writing is one of the most splendid pieces of pure love and devotion towards one's lover...I am impressed by your sublime feelings for your beloved!!! Carry one sweet lady, carry on....!!
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| Comment By: Eagle Eye on June 2, 2006 08:46:42 AM |
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Where would love be if we didn't belive in it like an infant child?
Perhaps it is about finding the one who shares our eyes...
thought this was a very nice write!
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| Comment By: b doneff on June 2, 2006 06:30:19 AM |
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You are a better woman than me to crank something like this out! WOW! I too loved that line that Rob mentioned, it just hit ya like a bag of bricks in the face...wow..Barbie
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| Comment By: Rob Sparks on April 20, 2006 03:29:40 AM |
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but like always its not me
the one you see.
Powerful words'
rOb
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| Comment By: Kaela on April 19, 2006 08:44:49 AM |
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I'm not going to pretend I know anything about Shakespeare but I thought this poem was beautiful anyway...great write. :0)
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