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Author Name: FreeDrummo87 5 Comments
Date Added: May 12, 2006 01:05:17 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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They Always Said One Was The Loneliest Number [But Only Without Two]

There's only one thing wrong here [x6]

Only one thing wrong here

And that is you are not here

For me to wipe away

Your tears... (and you mine)

What am I suppose to do alone?

There's only one thing wrong here [x4]

Only one thing wrong here

Why is that you ask yourself?

I say it's 'cause I cared too much

You loved me I know it's true

But you just never showed it

There's only one thing wrong here [x6]

Only one thing wrong here

We would have been better off

Had we known it would end like this

But every tear I shed over you

Is one less I'll shed over true love

There's only one thing wrong here [x4]

Only one thing wrong here

I know it's hard to look back on us

But just remember we weren't half bad

You and I like two lazy eyes just

Didn't follow in each others footsteps

There's only one thing wrong here [x6]

Only one thing wrong here

I can't help but think that those

Tears rolling down your cheeks

Were caused by a dream of me

You've been having for weeks

There's only one thing wrong here [x4]

Only one thing wrong here

Why don't we stop the child's play,

And start acting like two in-love adults?

If we smile and wipe away these tears,

I wonder what would be the result?

*(Only one thing wrong here) < repeats in background for remainder of song

There's only one thing wrong here [x6]

*(End repeat)

Only one thing wrong here

And that one thing is we,

Well you are not here with me

So please come back to me

Set our entwined hearts free

So we can forever be...

One.

Author's Notes:
Please let me know what you think, and let me know if you think the title fits the song! Thanks!
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeAngel on October 2, 2006 12:29:26 AM Report
This is great, I love it! I wish I could hear it as a song. And I love the title, too :-)
Comment By: FreeBernice on May 12, 2006 02:27:05 AM Report
i love it! its great!
~keep it up
~peace
Comment By: FreeBernice on May 12, 2006 02:26:23 AM Report
OH!
Comment By: Freemystical angel on May 12, 2006 02:01:35 AM Report
its a good write
and the words are in tune to the emotions
will pray she comes back
Comment By: FreeCARRIE on May 12, 2006 01:45:47 AM Report
AWWW NATE, ITS SO SAD AND FILLED WITH SUCH EMOTION. I HOPE ITS NOT TRUE, YOU DONT DESERVE IT. ALSO ITS A GREAT TITLE. IT FITS REAL WELL. GREAT WRITE!
*CARRIE*




 


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