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Author Name: PremiumShe Whispers 5 Comments
Date Added: June 24, 2006 11:06:58 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Vampire Alluring ~*~ Eyes
 

Why are you so drawn
to her in such
a strange seductive way? 

Can your heart explain
how she kisses you,
each whispering night
and stirring day?

~*~
Take warning

"She"
is far different from what
you suppose,
She moves slowly like a clinging
mist that covers your 
trembling skin and clothes

Enticing beauty is the sleeper
in your waiting soul
like spinning dope
in your  hungry veins
you can’t, ever let her go

Her native blood runs
with exotic passions
that are not contained,
 she whispers your name

She bites at your heart
with wanton  feelings
She always reins

She devours you in your firey thoughts
 She attacks with her fangs your caught 


Why is she so different from the rest 
You feel her always in your chest

Nibbling on your  sensitive neck to tease
 flickering warm tongue on your ears to please

Your warm blood on her full lips forever stained 
as you become  paralized to this burning flame


Then sharp lusty fangs penetrates
with pleasure to the main vein

She makes wild love to you 
you know you will never be the same 

Your surrendering blood now blends
for all eternity you belong to her darkness
in the vampire winds

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Comments:
Comment By: FreeFLETCHER on June 24, 2006 05:15:09 PM Report
Ooooh Love at first bite! I love This Dear One!
Yours .....Fletch

Comment By: FreeSharon Jorcil James on June 24, 2006 05:12:43 PM Report
WOW!!!! You've done it again my dear India.

Beautiful, romantic and captivating to say the least.

 

Sharon JJ

Comment By: FreeJillian K. Alexis on June 24, 2006 01:47:00 PM Report





Exquisitely penned sis. U penned your' words with fire, darkness, romance, and an alluring sense of danger yet love. This is yet another masterpiece, created from the beautiful mind and hands that only you could write. Simply breath-taking...Love, Tiger Rose


Comment By: FreeAngel on June 24, 2006 01:24:03 PM Report
One bite from the beautiful lady of passion. Red hot She

 

Love Angelxx

Comment By: FreeJoe on June 24, 2006 12:09:29 PM Report
My!! danger lurks around, but with such sensual writing .... ???

Beautifully done and descriptive

Joe





 


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