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Author Name: FreeLordofShadows 23 Comments
Date Added: July 12, 2006 01:07:46 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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The submisive

Am I sick?

Is there something wrong with me?

Because I am turned on by being taken

Being used by a power greater than my own?

 

Many think I am weak

Just because I submit

In this world of independence

I need someone to depend on

I am told I need no man

But that is not who I am

 

You do not know the strength

It takes to suppress my ego

To give my will to anotherís control

I must give up personal control

To stop acting in defense

I give up my fear of loss of status and worth

 

I give the gift of no resistance

To the Dom of my choice

A lifestyle contract

And a safety word

That guides our world

 

Being submissive is not just about the sex

It extends beyond the bedroom

Itís a lifestyle I choose to live

Regardless of what others think

 

Without access to my inner being

The reward of my body has no meaning

I give only to those who truly deserve

The one for me receives the key

 

You can not force me to submit

That is my choice and my will alone

Use of force, intimidation or fear

That is not submission

It is only abuse

 

I take responsibility

For my submissive ways

No government, religion or any person

Can cause me to feel shame

I will not feel guilt

For who I am

I will not allow myself to be censored

I will be free

 

I am not corrupt

I am sane

I am healthy

I am not sick

I am me

I accept the submissive me

 

My Master gives me all I need

I return and fulfill his commands

He takes care of his pet

In return for my inner self.

 

 

Author's Notes:
I dedicate this to jolen. I hope I did this right. I can not do this justice, for it falls too short. Oh, by the way jolen, the Master is looking for you. Lol Enjoy!
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeMichelle on June 24, 2009 04:03:48 AM Report
You expressed yourself honestly so you did it right. You're still so awesome!
Comment By: FreeMichelle on June 24, 2009 03:53:20 AM Report

Awesome! Another great write! It is very honest and true.


Comment By: FreeJames Thomas Whitworth on January 2, 2007 02:35:24 AM Report
Master has found her.
Comment By: FreeGoliath Assassin on October 8, 2006 04:44:20 AM Report
Huh? I submit to God... that would make me submissive, I guess... But I also submit to no man... well, except my employer, for the time being... So am I a Dom? I don't know... I honestly don't get this poem.
Comment By: FreeDreamBreaker on August 26, 2006 08:33:49 AM Report
Wow.  I am speechless, how honest, and true to every word.

Holly

Comment By: FreeMujtaba H Zaidi on August 13, 2006 03:18:14 AM Report
Please accept my heartiest congratulations on winning the award.......This magnificent piece of poesy undoubtedly deserves the awards and admiration
Comment By: FreeCharles on August 7, 2006 07:31:44 PM Report
wow, this poem is both deep and inspiring. it gives me a little bit of pride and or courage to admit things like this. keep writing
Comment By: FreeJames Thomas Whitworth on July 23, 2006 08:30:05 AM Report
 

I can't help but admire the courage that it took to post this, and also your conviction in choosing this lifestyle which shows that you perhaps have a greater understanding of human nature/purpose than most of us will ever reach.

Congratulations on your award.

Comment By: FreeCynthia Jones on July 20, 2006 11:46:43 PM Report
Congrats for your muchly deserved award. *S* Wind Whisperer
Comment By: FreeBarbara Demasson on July 20, 2006 03:49:41 AM Report
Congratulations! Your views on the subject are clearly expressed.

~Barbara~

Comment By: FreeTracy Fletcher on July 18, 2006 08:50:13 PM Report

Congratulations on winning a well deserved Featured Poem Award.
Tracy


Comment By: ModeratorAdri on July 17, 2006 04:53:32 AM Report

Michael, congratulations on the award.  Very well deserved for this brutally honest poem!! 
Adri x


Comment By: ModeratorLady Dragonwyck on July 16, 2006 10:14:08 PM Report
Congratulations on your Feature Poem Award.

 

Lady D

Comment By: FreeJillian K. Alexis on July 16, 2006 09:25:03 PM Report
Congratulations Michael on winning the featured poem of the week award. I am so happy for u...Hugz...Jillian
Comment By: FreeLeonard Wilson on July 16, 2006 07:47:31 PM Report
Hey, you shadowy lord, you..Congrats on a well deserved award, buddy...This is a fine effort..Now, on yer knees!!...Mystery Guy
Comment By: FreePia Andersson on July 15, 2006 11:56:05 AM Report
To me love is about belonging
to belong is not to be weak
only the one with a strong ego
will fullo know what submitting is about
Thank you for a beautiful poem -Pia

Comment By: FreeAlison Storm Wolf on July 13, 2006 07:24:00 AM Report
People think that to be submissive is to be weak. I think to be submissive can be a strength as you so rightly poit out here.

It takes strength to walk a different road and not fall into the pack mentality.

Ali x

Comment By: Freeb doneff on July 12, 2006 07:58:15 AM Report
I think I may be a peculiar mixture of all of this. Dom/sub, lol...you did a fine job with this, and although I am not well schooled on this world, I do happen to believe people have their own lives and should be able to lead them as so..Barbie
Comment By: FreeGlata on July 12, 2006 07:51:44 AM Report
I think that you did great justice to this! It's not shameful to be submissive...but some people tend to see it that way. Everyone needs to be able to express themselves in whatever way they feel without being ridiculed for it, or being seen as weak.

Awesome job, Michael!

Hugs...

Glata

Comment By: ModeratorAdri on July 12, 2006 06:29:13 AM Report

This is a very very good write Michael!!  Really a great poem.  Your honesty is clearly visible and you dedication.  However, I must be honest in saying, I donít understand the concept at all; I think my personality is just in a different wave length maybe.  I do respect the view points of course!!  Great write and great poem.  You really are Poe's Successor!! 
Adri x


Comment By: FreeLeonard Wilson on July 12, 2006 06:11:58 AM Report
Ypou need tto emty yer message box, buddy..I can't respond to your comments...Mystery Guy
Comment By: FreeLinear Z on July 12, 2006 03:30:53 AM Report
This is amazing. Such an accurate and beautiful poem. You have gotten to the heart of the submisive way so clearly.

Ditto to everythign Jolen and Len have said.

-Linear


Comment By: FreeLeonard Wilson on July 12, 2006 02:35:46 AM Report
Veery impressive, Michael.. You are aquick study, I can tell..Great job here..I mean that..len




 


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