Pieces by Derek Tower

		Author Name: TorturedSoul	2 Comments
		Date Added: July 16, 2006 00:07:18	Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Pieces

She said I love you,
but I can't do this anymore,
every time you leave a piece of me
falls to the floor, and I've just had enough,
I can't take too much, leavin me behind
like this ain't fair to the both of us
so I'm sorry, please forgive me,
but every time I have to say goodbye
I fall to pieces.

There were tears in his eyes
as he formed his reply,
he just couldn't believe
after all these years
it was time to say goodbye,
this was his last chance
to make a last stand
but he just fell apart when she
put her ring in his hand
and as she walked away
he found the strength to say
I hope your life turns out alright,
while I fall to pieces.

Author's Notes:

This is my first attempt at song lyrics. It's not finished yet. Lol, I seem to be doing that a lot lately. Anyway, give me your thoughts on what I have so far please. It's much appreciated.

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Comments:

	Comment By: bloodtear on October 1, 2006 12:27:22 PM	Report
	i really liked this alot actually, i wouldnt have guessed it wasnt finished. This was really rather sad, made my heart ache a bit, the way you wrote this was so personal i wouldnt be surprised if it had been you. great write Respond To This Comment

	Comment By: stef on July 18, 2006 03:26:31 PM	Report
	i like it. Respond To This Comment