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Author Name: FreePoeticSoul 1 Comments
Date Added: July 26, 2006 22:07:30 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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No Heart Beating in Me
There is nothing inside of me
No heart beating in me
I cannot feel what is real

I'm empty inside
And I don't have plenty
Breaths left in me
So this is how I want it to be

Love me, hate me
Tell me is this all I have to take
Before I break?

There is no heart beating in me
How long do I have to hold on before I fall?
Tell me is this how its going to be?
Empty, alone and cold
Having no place to call home

Now I fell no remorse
My demise is coming near
And for all those hearts that are still beating
I will be bleeding but not breathing anymore
Cause I have no heart being in me
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Comment By: FreeRandy Harrison on July 27, 2006 08:24:09 AM Report

Great use of symbolism. Nicely written. Peace, Randy






 


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