I Want You by Dairine Bennett

		Author Name: just_another_poet	12 Comments
		Date Added: August 22, 2006 14:08:24	Average Score: (Needs 2)
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I Want You

I want to feel your lips on mine
As raindrops fall from the sky

I want us to fall alseep under the stars
Together, you and I

I want to see the world with you
Hong Kong, Paris, Rome, D.C.

I want to be open and honest with you
No secrets - 100% me

I want you to be my first
On a romantic, passionate night

I want you to take my heart
Don't break it, hold it tight

I want you to write me a song
And play it for me as I fall asleep

And all the promises you made me
I want you to keep

I want to walk along the beach
Watch the sunset and stay 'til sunrise

I want to gaze at you forever
Let me get lost on your eyes

I want to walk on water
To prove to you this is real

I want to write you a thousand poems
To show you how I feel

I want you to bring me to the moon
Because I can love you anywhere

I want you to want to fight for me
To show me that you care

I want to share our dreams with eachother
And watch them all come true

You know I want you - so the question is
Do you want me too?

Author's Notes:

Self explanatory....I think it's missing something but I don't know what it is yet. x x x x

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Comments:

	Comment By: Brittany Rainess on January 19, 2009 01:47:46 PM	Report
	this is adorable! beautiful romantic elements. i like the rhyme scheme also. great write! brittles skittles Respond To This Comment

	Comment By: S on December 16, 2008 06:33:02 PM	Report
	yup sure do ! lol jk beautiful poem D you rock Respond To This Comment

	Comment By: Janice Herzog on December 6, 2008 01:48:49 PM	Report
	Dear Dairine: Very romantically written. You expressed yourself well here. Love, janjan xoxo Respond To This Comment

	Comment By: amy Louise on September 14, 2006 03:32:30 AM	Report
	what an expressive and creative piece you have here. i enjoy your sense of writing, i see real talent here well done :) amy Respond To This Comment

	Comment By: Lubaina on September 8, 2006 03:18:30 AM	Report
	Great poem...Your gift in words portray an inner you, which I really appreciate, thank you for sharing, I thoroughly enjoyed. Lubs. Respond To This Comment

	Comment By: Henry M. on August 27, 2006 12:23:11 PM	Report
	I think you will get what you wish for Dairine, you have your life before you so it will come in time. Loved your expressions in this write. Henry Respond To This Comment

	Comment By: Joe McNinney on August 25, 2006 09:09:37 PM	Report
	I want you to know, this is out of sight, I want you to know, I just love this write! LOL! Joe Respond To This Comment

	Comment By: She Whispers on August 24, 2006 09:04:33 AM	Report
	Just beautiful lady... I think you have said it all...leave it like it is!!! Later ~She Whispers Respond To This Comment

	Comment By: Paul on August 22, 2006 08:06:08 PM	Report
	This is very sweet - Well done! Paul Respond To This Comment

	Comment By: on August 22, 2006 04:15:26 PM	Report
	This Was Extremly Romantic For a 15 Year Old !! But I Loved It . Ur Very Talented And You Know What You Want Which Is Wonderfull Love Is Amazing Isnt It Respond To This Comment

	Comment By: Joe on August 22, 2006 03:37:31 PM	Report
	A wonderful poem you have here, I think it is perfect. Joe Respond To This Comment

	Comment By: Richard Michael Cronin on August 22, 2006 03:24:39 PM	Report
	Young hearts are as wild as flowers Young love must have bloomed Young passion is surely burning Enjoy your trip up to the moon! Very lovely poem, great! Respond To This Comment