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Author Name: Freexobri06ox 0 Comments
Date Added: October 03, 2006 15:10:16 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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YOUR LIFE
Your eyes open.
to your left there is a man, stained black and red, he is lieng, sleeping,dieng. trapped within his cage of death for some untold time
ahead of you  is a child weeping laying next to the body of another victim waiting for thier resurection.
You try to think of where you are but your head aches as you scan your unreachable memories.
Clothes from a formal affair ripped to shreds are stuck to your body by the dried blood from  your viens.
you try to move but have lost all feeling. You speak words that can be heard by none, you cry out and scream but none can hear whats only in your head.
You hear voices but find no human from which they come. these voices resound only in your head.
You can't make out the words over the muffled ringing in your head from the shock of everything.
where am I?
Who am I?
What has happened?
How long have i been here?
You try to move, your will becomes stronger with you fear of this unknown state. Frantically you begin to run. You fear your running for your life. You open doors that lead to unlite rooms you are too scared to enter. The labrinth of your own mind is the scariest place imaginable.
Will you ever find your way out?
You run til exaustion brings you crashing down and then there is nothing..........................................
 
 
 
 
Black abyss with echoing greif of the ones you love.
 
Then you hear the farmiliar sound of an inocents.
"Mommy, I prayed for you today." the love filled tear strikes your face.
"I know you will wake up in time"
"I brought you some pictures to look at"
"here is one of me and Daddy"
"I know you said God wasnt real, but he protected me, and took daddy to heaven."
 
God! you think, God would want me with my child he would not take her from me and make me suffer this way.
 
"when we were on our way back from that banquet, I saw an angel."
"She told me that god needed help, that I was the only one that could save you."
 
You begin to cry, you scream and yell at God but then you pray, "Lord if you let me be with my daughter i will change my ways i will follow your path and live my life for you."
 
"Mommy! your awake,"
then you feel the warmth of your daughter embrace you and you both begin to cry.
You stroke her head and say I love you baby and God is watching over us.
 
 
Your doctors rush in and stare in amazment.
 
 
they ask your daughter to leave the room for a moment so the can speak with you.
the doctor tells you, "To be quite honest we were set to pull the plug on you this afternoon"
"We didnt think you would ever come out of that coma"
 
You say "i dont remember what happened exactally"
 
"Two months ago you were in an accident, you and your daughter were not wearing  seat belts and were thrown from the car, your daughter suffered only minor injuries but you on the other hand died and had to be resesitated, into a comatose state. We are sorry to inform you that your husband was trapped inside the car and did not make it out alive."
 
Author's Notes:
just felt like changing things up a little bit. let you see what life could be like through your eyes. Im not saying go be some churchy person but enjoy what you have!
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