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Author Name: Freebigdt2386 2 Comments
Date Added: August 29, 2003 14:08:04 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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~please take me back~
if i could take it all back i would

if i could make everything better i would

i cant express how sorry i am

i sit here and wish i could just hold ur hand

and never let go

i wish you could just know how much u mean to me

all the little things that people dont see but me

like the way you look at me

like the way you touched me

i really wanted you to be

here for such a long while

i really wanted to just see you smile

every day and here u say you wanted me too

but ive messed up and i dont know what to do

i wish i could make things so much better

so im sitting here writting you this letter

hoping youd see through my mistakes

and forgive me please

i can be the best man in this world

just say youll be my girl

just know ill be your friend forever and a day

but i just really need to hear you say all the things you used too

i cant sleep at night

when i close my eyes ur the only thing in sight

i smell you on the dog u gave me

cant u see

you complete me

so bring it back to where it used to be

just you and me

baby please oh please
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Comments:
Comment By: PremiumShe Whispers on August 29, 2003 03:51:11 PM Report
VERY POWERFUL POEM...
Comment By: FreeLance Binkley on August 29, 2003 03:47:45 PM Report
A very nice poem that's full of emotion.




 


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