| Comments: |
 |
Comment By:  Steve on June 13, 2008 07:45:45 AM |
Report |
This IS love !
|
 |
| Comment By: abby on September 21, 2007 08:47:47 AM |
Report |
A true confession drawn from the heart's depths.
Abby
|
 |
| Comment By: Eli D. on May 3, 2007 10:49:17 AM |
Report |
Lovely, flowing language and imagery, a very well written piece. Nicely done.
|
|
| Comment By: Emil on March 1, 2007 11:53:21 AM |
Report |
You have certainly written and expessive and beautiful piece bringing forth thoughts of love at it's full wonderment
Well done.
Emil
|
 |
| Comment By: bloodtear on February 21, 2007 04:03:29 AM |
Report |
beautiful write. i could feel the truth of expression in this, and loved it. keep it up =)
|
|
| Comment By: Emil on February 19, 2007 03:45:28 PM |
Report |
What a wonderful expession of love and longing. You have captured the thought of both here
Wonderful
Emil
|
 |
| Comment By: Goliath Assassin on December 27, 2006 02:06:24 PM |
Report |
Yeah, olny a chick coulda' written this one, lol! Stop it now, you're making me all mushy! (***clanking armor***)
|
 |
| Comment By: Darkness Rides This Night on December 11, 2006 03:31:40 AM |
Report |
A beautiful expression of the love you have and have given..! Excellent poem my friend.. !
|
 |
Comment By:  Henry M. on December 7, 2006 10:56:07 AM |
Report |
Wonderful piece Adri, so much love and tenderness in the words, truly beautiful poem.
Henry
|
|
| Comment By: Christopher on December 7, 2006 10:56:04 AM |
Report |
Fan-Freaking-Tastic Adri. =D
You have such a good choice of wording.
|
 |
Comment By:  Joe McNinney on December 7, 2006 10:01:03 AM |
Report |
WOW! Beautiful write, very loving and tender Adri, Joe
|
|
| Comment By: Leonard Wilson on December 7, 2006 02:36:46 AM |
Report |
The descritions of the real thing..LOve is the best magic of all,,,May every day be just so, Adri...len
|
 |
| Comment By: Ann on December 6, 2006 09:08:31 PM |
Report |
Wow....lovely.....
|
 |
| Comment By: leahlopez on December 6, 2006 02:17:38 PM |
Report |
Beautifully written Adri,
LOPEZ X
|
 |
| Comment By: Last Temple Knight on December 6, 2006 01:55:02 PM |
Report |
Very beautiful and deeply moving... words from the heart.
|
 |
| Comment By: MISS_VEE on December 6, 2006 08:17:47 AM |
Report |
Glata says that u aint "lost it" but i think u ave, i know u now ya see n ur just as crazy as me, so yeah you've "lost it" hun :) rotf!
beautiful poem btw....fantastic!
love ya girl...Vee x
|
 |
| Comment By: Devilish Minx on December 6, 2006 07:53:25 AM |
Report |
beautiful....thats the only word that does this poem any justice...and even then it falls short for the beauty and raw emotion that this invokes....
Minxy
|
 |
| Comment By: Glata on December 6, 2006 07:45:07 AM |
Report |
Dear Ah!!
Don't you ever again think you've "Lost it"!! Girl this is fantastic, and the raw heart that is poured out here is utterly beautiful...just like the woman it comes from! If this is "not very good" then I can't wait to see magnificent!
Love you girl, and you're amazing!!!
GG
|
 |
| Comment By: James Thomas Whitworth on December 6, 2006 06:22:40 AM |
Report |
If this didn't have your name on it, Adri, I would still know to whom it belonged. The language and the form are all your own.
A couple of very minor things, just slips of the finger while typing really. At the end of the first verse, that should read 'breathing it all in' rather than 'on', and in the last verse, 'you face' should be 'your face'.
Those aside, we like. Juicy Girl does good. Again :)
|
 |
| Comment By: Wide Awake on December 6, 2006 06:22:36 AM |
Report |
Heartwarming Adri~
You speak with great heart and smooth sophistication...beautifully written ode... :o)
Hugs,
Little Fox~
|
