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Author Name: FreeLonely 2 Comments
Date Added: August 06, 2007 14:08:13 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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World With Many Broken People
Cold, Lonely World stop bleeding.
Light up your darkened nights,
calm your treacherous storms,
and dry your rivers of tears
so your stars may have a chance
at shinging bright.
Author's Notes:
Uhm...I guess you can conjure this as a comparison between earth and people, both are being destroyed in different ways. And each can relate to one another. This one's a bit tricky to understand why both earth and people can relate to each other...I guess you have to read it carefully. I hate the darn format. -_-
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Comments:
Comment By: Premiumlionheart on August 11, 2007 03:33:08 PM Report
I interpret this as a plea to Mother Nature.

 

R xo

Comment By: FreeRin Marie on August 6, 2007 02:56:15 PM Report
I think you could have even gone further with this, but I do like it as is.  It is so true, but luckily there will always be people in this world who want to fix all that is broken....god bless them.

 

Love, Rin





 


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