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Comment By:  Jennifer on April 1, 2010 08:41:49 AM |
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This is true to my heart and I am sure everyone felt this once in their lives. We have to go through heartache to really know how to love. I Love your poem dear Adri~
Jen
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Comment By:  Linda Jo on August 19, 2009 01:29:01 AM |
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i really like the line, "acting like a novice in love" ...none of us are pros in this gift called love but it surely hurts when we are fooled and the gift is snatched away. much emotion fills the page...will love visit you again...next time for keeps? it is worth giving it one more try!
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| Comment By: Steve on May 27, 2008 09:01:49 PM |
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Sometimes we don't hear what they say but what we want to hear. Love is good but never seems clear.
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| Comment By: Leonard Wilson on March 10, 2008 03:26:04 PM |
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I don't believe in telling other people what to feel. I do know that when the real thing comes along, nothing short of death can get in the way of it. The pain in this ppoem is artfylly expressed, Adri...len
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| Comment By: Barbara Demasson on February 22, 2008 02:59:29 AM |
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Love IS..until it isn't any longer, nothing is completely one sided though, I'm sure loss is felt by both of you. To believe in love is a good thing. Remember the expression, "Better to have loved and lost than to not have loved at all.", well it is so true. Be thankful for the experience Adri, it was one of a kind.
Hugz,
~Barbara~
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| Comment By: Damon D. Brewer on February 21, 2008 03:23:51 AM |
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That is the right way to give your love. It is to bad that he didn't give his the same way. I know that is the way that I give mine and would expect another to love me in return as well.
May I suggest that you switch the last two words at least long enough to look at them and see if you agree. I think that it would work better with me being the last word and with the next to last; although, I do like it as it is. I read it both ways and to me the other just reads a bit better.
Damon
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| Comment By: Samuel E. Stone on January 16, 2008 01:58:43 PM |
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An emotional, well written piece...
Wishing you well...
Sam
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Comment By:  Henry M. on January 13, 2008 09:52:18 AM |
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So sad when love goes wrong. There is so much heartbreak out there, but there is also an equal amount of fulfillment as well. You will find your Prince Adri, he is out there for you!
Henry
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| Comment By: Herman Salazar, Jr. on January 10, 2008 02:32:33 AM |
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Love always comes back. Maybe not by the one you were hoping it would be, but just look around you, it's everywhere.
Good work,
Herman
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| Comment By: Craig David Dawson on January 5, 2008 07:02:26 AM |
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heart breakingly true and emotional...love it and you.
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| Comment By: abby on December 11, 2007 09:58:22 AM |
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This is heartbreaking - the openess of trust against furtive and mysteriousness of
treachery. The voice is distinct and the emotions conveyed, touching.
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| Comment By: FLETCHER on December 6, 2007 04:58:07 AM |
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You are so gifted. Your Expression is Exquisite. So Heartfelt.
Cheers to you.....Fletch
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| Comment By: SilkinTears on December 1, 2007 01:12:23 AM |
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Adri you have nothing to be ashamed of. Giving your heart unconditionally, being volunerable is a strenghth not a weekness. You can't control or predict the heart of another. Beating yourself up for trusting is just punishing yourself. What for? You did nothing wrong.
Helen
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| Comment By: Last Temple Knight on November 30, 2007 12:43:04 PM |
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Happiness is what we seek, but an open mind is needed as well as an open heart.
Unfortunately there is a growing number of people who seek to play games with others.
Life is already hard enough, people like that make it even harder...
My heart goes out to you my friend, the scars of pain are gashed upon me as well.
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| Comment By: She Whispers on November 30, 2007 10:18:23 AM |
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Adri,
Painful is heartaches and we all experiance them Its to bad it didn't last... some things are just not meant to be no matter how much we dream with hopes...
My heart has been right where you are todoy....and for that I am so sorry.
You write very beautiful with love poems and heartaches
~ She Whispers
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| Comment By: Zyskandar A Jaimot on November 30, 2007 10:10:05 AM |
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geag A - don't know exactly how to react to this - at once my empathy is invoked to all 'suffering' animals AND YET i am sure you will survive/go on perhaps to endure yet more affairs of the heart and yes even perhaps your soul --- that is the fate of homo sapiens unlike the 'lower forms' sometimes men and other troglodytes thanks for sharing something so personal regards zaj
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| Comment By: lionheart on November 30, 2007 08:43:36 AM |
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This got inside me and twisted like the pain I have known.
It IS beautiful ...the way you have described this torture.
Richard xo
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| Comment By: Lady Dragonwyck on November 30, 2007 08:35:19 AM |
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Adri: beautifully written ---
Lady D
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| Comment By: Filthy on November 30, 2007 08:08:04 AM |
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I don't think i'm in any position to pass judgement on this Adri.
It is a well writen piece though.
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| Comment By: Glata on November 30, 2007 06:29:51 AM |
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Ah, hon...I'm SO sorry!!! I can feel the misery in every line...and for anyone to break a trusting heart, they have to be the type of person that doesn't have one of their own. Sweetie...I'm here.
Love ya, l'il sister....
GG
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| Comment By: b doneff on November 30, 2007 06:21:01 AM |
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Uh oh.....this doesn't sound good..I mean, the wirte was awesome, as often that's all we have left, a bleeding heart..
b
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| Comment By: Graham Jones on November 30, 2007 05:44:46 AM |
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Many will find this a painful read for seeing themselves in it described with a passion for being the fool and the emotional plaything of another, the loss of trust, self guilt and anger, hate and remorse all become a burden to be borne for the selfish actions of one who gained trust on false pretences, excellent writing Adri.
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