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Author Name: Freela-la908 3 Comments
Date Added: February 05, 2008 00:02:35 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Hold My Hand As We Journey Together

 

Open your ears to hear my whispered love
for I can be as gentle as the cooling breeze

Just walk with me and hold my hand

Trust me like the wise strong limbs of trees.

 

Let your deep ocean eyes float into the distance

My love for you is in the waves rested on the sand.

Pulled back into the vast water this love has no end

Leave our footprints in rhythmic waves holding hands.

 

Feel a refreshing rain drop land on your red lips

For that is a lover's kiss purely meant for you.

Let them gently fall and rest on your skin

So true and free our love is now renewed.

 

Let me colour you with affectionate feelings

Smell the scent of passionate essence float

Hold my hand through our journey's rainbow

And store in your precious heart these words I wrote.

Author's Notes:
Hmmmmm
This one took ages to finally finish.
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeClaude Infinklesteinenburg on March 20, 2008 01:27:56 PM Report
This is pretty much beautiful. 
Comment By: FreeGee on February 6, 2008 11:04:13 AM Report
worth the time spent....I'm melt with this poem...

Comment By: FreeSteve on February 5, 2008 11:46:00 AM Report
It was time well spent............your poem(s) allow me feel what you are feeling. This is a gift.




 


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