Think to Breathe by Amy

		Author Name: rainbowchaser	5 Comments
		Date Added: April 13, 2008 21:04:25	Average Score: (Needs 2)
		Views This Week Members: 0 Unique Members: 0 Guests: 0	Total Views Members: 74 Unique Members: 22 Guests: 1232

Type: Unspecified

Category: Grieving & Loss

| Text Only

Think to Breathe

Blushing citrus skies

Kiss the shore, a new dawning.

Whispering winds upon the waves

Call out his name, in mourning.

I have to think to breathe...

Blushing citrus skies

Kiss the shore at day's break.

A vast blue expanse

Matches eyes that danced.

Eyes, that pierced the soul

That begged, borrowed, stole

My breath away...

Blushing citrus skies

Kiss the shore, Good Morning.

Memories crash at my feet

And scatter across the sand.

I'll bury myself deep, forlorning.

Remembering us, at our best

Until I catch my breath.

Author's Notes:

'Think to Breathe' Copyright © Amy
Copyright is property of the above author or group. Reproduction in whole or in part is strictly prohibited.
Click here if you feel this poem is in violation of a copyright.

Comments:

	Comment By: Mary Lou Allen on November 4, 2008 03:42:14 PM	Report
	I don't think I can say exactly how much I love this work. Just know that I love it. Before I came online today thoughts very similar to yours were tumbling around in my brain but hadn't yet settled into something I could write, and now I see that you've already written it. Well done. ML Respond To This Comment

	Comment By: Jose Noriega on April 14, 2008 01:36:42 PM	Report
	this is a good poem the ending is what i felt the most Respond To This Comment

	Comment By: Joe McNinney on April 14, 2008 06:24:05 AM	Report
	*I think Adri below says it best. Nicely done, Joe* Respond To This Comment

	Comment By: Adri on April 14, 2008 03:04:45 AM	Report
	Poetry is poetry, as long as it has soul and feel, it can be only one sentence. This is perfect, just as is. Talk about starting out with a bang! If this is the first, I can not wait to see the rest. Adri x Respond To This Comment

	Comment By: Vince on April 14, 2008 12:41:31 AM	Report
	i really don't have anything to offer other than i read it, i felt it, and it left me speechless (at least for the last few minutes). Detailed critique. Hmm. i still have nothing, for this poem, in my opinion, should not be touched again, it is perfect. Thanks for sharing. -vince Respond To This Comment