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Comment By:  Barbara Demasson on May 11, 2009 03:47:49 PM |
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The waiting must be torture knowing there is risk involved. Your poem indicates you understand how a woman in the situation feels. Tender write Steve.
~Barbara~
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| Comment By: Mary F. Charest on September 15, 2008 08:50:46 PM |
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Very touching and beautifully written.
Mary
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| Comment By: Leonard Wilson on July 24, 2008 04:30:18 PM |
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Absence makes the heart grow fonder...Sometimes, it makes the heart grow fonder for someone else, but that's another story. :o)..Nicely worded, Shady Steve...len
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| Comment By: SilkinTears on July 24, 2008 11:29:01 AM |
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Touching deep write..Each stanza tugs at the heart. Well written Steve.
Helen
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Comment By:  She Whispers on July 23, 2008 09:10:32 PM |
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I feel this poem more than you know!! Hugs ~ She
I trace silent steps with thoughts of only you
Loneliness moves with me like my shadow
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| Comment By: john j. carey on July 23, 2008 08:19:04 PM |
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Steve, Well done my friend, john
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| Comment By: Gee on July 23, 2008 07:07:23 PM |
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Steve.....
This is Sad but do touch my emotion very deeply...
However, as always your poem is just Excellent!!...
Hugs
Gee xx
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| Comment By: DeAnna on July 23, 2008 06:53:23 PM |
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Ahh Steve,
You have hit another powerful emotion, with the almighty words.... my daughter shares this,as well
with the others..waiting for him to to return..powerful write.....Hus, DeAnna
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| Comment By: Moon Fairy on July 23, 2008 04:18:58 PM |
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Steve,
This hits close to home because one of my good friends is going through having to wait for
her new husband to come back from Iraq.
Bittersweet write,
~Tracie
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| Comment By: Amy on July 23, 2008 03:54:11 PM |
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a sad poem and unfortunately what alot of people are going through right now.
good job of capturing the emotions of those left behind and putting them into words.
~Amy
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| Comment By: Cathy on July 23, 2008 03:04:41 PM |
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Love it very sad poem with hope and love Excellent
........Cathy
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Comment By:  Adri on July 23, 2008 02:06:11 PM |
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Sad and uplifting write.
Beautiful Steve.
Adri x
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