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Author Name: FreeTalia 2 Comments
Date Added: September 07, 2008 05:09:17 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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A faithful art

A watercolour world of love,

The perfect picture at the start,

Creating each new masterpiece,

Loves artist, cupid, painting hard,

 

Every stroke appears to be,

So flawless when two hearts entwine,

Colours mixing, hearts beat as one,

As always young love’s forever blind,   

 

Colours fading, cracks appear,

The subjects disappointed in their vows,

Time is changing what was once,

The picture not so perfect now,

 

Two subjects joined by cupids power,

An artist who brings happiness,

But shadows creep into the heart,

When one forgets the art of faithfulness.

Author's Notes:
HELP!
 
I know where I wanted to go with this but I couldn't quite get there, lol, any help would be greatly appreciated.
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeS on September 7, 2008 06:43:32 PM Report
funny i stumbled on to this because i was in the middle of writing a poem with the same type of metaphor

i think i can help you on this
shoaib

Comment By: PremiumCathy on September 7, 2008 08:57:11 AM Report
I think this is absolutely perfect the way it is very beautifully put so well written just perfect... I love it and really enjoyed my read and into my favorites it goes
.........Cathy





 


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