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Comment By:  Frederick Kesner on January 9, 2013 06:54:40 AM |
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Oh the cruelty of it all! Sometimes they are cruel to be kind. But it is their internal anguish externalised. As with the monster of Dr. Frankenstein and the alterego in Jekyll and Hyde.
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| Comment By: Damon D. Brewer on April 21, 2010 04:00:59 AM |
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Wonderfully well written piece that you have here my friend. I love it. You go Girl! You know that you deserved the award that it won. I am proud of you. Damon
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| Comment By: Andrew on November 4, 2009 03:17:06 PM |
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callous flourishes of love.....wow - I love that. Quite a twist on the old story of Pygmalion - I can understand the award.
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| Comment By: Moon Fairy on June 23, 2009 11:42:21 PM |
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Adri,
Beautifully written and belated congratulations on your award.
~Tracie
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| Comment By: Goliath Assassin on June 10, 2009 04:11:26 PM |
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Ah, yes! I'd give you an award for this one myself! The truth is raw, and the content is so Adri! Whether the seducer or the seduced, in both victory and defeat, your writes are so romantic, hon. You have a very romantic heart. And that is not a bad thing at all, though it may seem so at times...
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Comment By:  David Turner on November 11, 2008 03:23:28 AM |
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You have made yourself sound like one of those slaves of Michael Angelo struggling, half-finished, out of a block of marble - they are astounding accidental masterpieces.
Sorry I did not congratulate you lst month on this. Well Done.
David
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| Comment By: abby on October 23, 2008 06:27:07 AM |
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It is often difficulte to change the course of love.
Its waves blows you beyond expected directions.
Anyway, thats the way love goes.
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| Comment By: Leonard Wilson on October 20, 2008 07:19:46 PM |
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Another winner, kid!...Great writing, Adri..I'm impressed...Mr. Cool... :o)
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| Comment By: Antony Frank on October 9, 2008 03:22:51 AM |
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Excellent poem, deserves the award.
Congratulations.
Antony.
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| Comment By: Alison Storm Wolf on October 4, 2008 07:08:32 AM |
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congratulations on a very deserving piece here Adri. I always find such a sense of "you" in your work..It's extremely personal and gives your work depth and value.
Ali x
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| Comment By: Mary Lou Allen on October 3, 2008 02:12:36 AM |
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I don't know. Sometimes I think we're just puppets and anyone who comes along with the right set of words and gestures is allowed to pull the strings. Well done, Adri. Very. ML
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| Comment By: Roger Bacon on September 30, 2008 01:03:43 PM |
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Hang in there and keep writing. That's all we can do. Congrats on your award!
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| Comment By: Raymond Pinsonneault on September 30, 2008 11:02:26 AM |
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Deeply meaningful write, excellent arrangement, wording. Loved it.
CONGRATULATIONS,
by the way, don't change anything. see my "Being I"
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Comment By:  Henry M. on September 29, 2008 09:29:55 AM |
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Congratulations on the award Adri! Condolences on the sadness that caused you to express your words this way. I offer you a shoulder to lean on and an ear that will listen, hope you will heal quickly. Henry
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| Comment By: Cathy on September 29, 2008 08:57:38 AM |
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Congratulations on this very deserving award. Bravo
...........Cathy
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| Comment By: Joe McNinney on September 28, 2008 10:31:37 PM |
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Who in their right mind would hurt you Adri? Point him out and I'll have the man shot! Sad and heart-felt write. Congrats, Joe
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| Comment By: Lady Dragonwyck on September 28, 2008 06:24:30 PM |
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Adri: congratulations on the Award for this heart-felt write. Keep up the great posts.
Lady D
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| Comment By: Filthy on September 22, 2008 04:33:36 PM |
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I go along with what Jolen said. Great poem Adri.
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| Comment By: Glata on September 16, 2008 03:12:18 PM |
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Wow, girl...you laid it on the line here, and I don't know how ANYone could ever harm your loving heart...Powerful and deep...and methinks we're long overdue for a serious heart-to-heart!
I love ya, girl....
GG
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| Comment By: Lady Dragonwyck on September 15, 2008 06:45:40 PM |
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Adri: this is such a heart-felt in-depth write, very well written.
Lady D
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| Comment By: b doneff on September 15, 2008 05:23:04 PM |
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Wonderfully expressed, the pain that rides alongside love too often.
b
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| Comment By: Wide Awake on September 15, 2008 05:10:13 PM |
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A true work of art are your poems Adri.
A real pleasure to read poetry such as yours,
Thanks for sharing...
Hugs,
Pamela
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| Comment By: Steve on September 15, 2008 02:09:31 PM |
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Wonderful imagery from silken words that move softly across the page.
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| Comment By: Cathy on September 15, 2008 11:26:06 AM |
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A very sad write here, love the use of the Greek King in mythology who fell in love the goddess Aphrodite and then made a statue of her. Perfect comparison, love that is carved in stone as a statue is a cold and uncaring love and yes a love where you truly feel trapped.. Excellent write here really enjoyed my read.
...........Cathy
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