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Author Name: FreeLen 12 Comments
Date Added: March 30, 2009 19:03:22 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Whizzing in the Moonlight
(I noticed this classic disappeared from the site,
so I put it back}
 
{prelude}
I saw you whizzing in the moonlight
And you looked just like a dream
*
From that moment on-I've loved you
Since I saw you-squatting there
With the starlight-up above you
And the moonlight-in your hair
 
{Chorus}
*
I saw you whizzing in the moonlight
In the meadow by the stream
I saw you whizzing in the moonlight
And you looked just like a dream
*
I saw an angel-in the moonlight
And the vision-left me weak
I will always-dream of that night
When I watched you-spread your cheeks

{Chorus}
*
I saw you whizzing in the moonlight
In the meadow by the stream
I saw you whizzing in the moonlight
And you looked just...
 
Like a dream
*
Author's Notes:

BTW...I wrote this back when I was still drinking. :o)

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Comments:
Comment By: FreeShanna McCormick on January 11, 2010 02:08:26 PM Report
Haha!! I love it. I live in the wooded, rocky mountains and it's not too uncommon of a sight while huckleberry picking, hunting, or very long car rides to see someone trying to hide behind a tree...I, however, try not to look ;)

 

~Shanna

Comment By: Freejohn carter on May 31, 2009 04:26:25 PM Report
Len. You have a sense of humour that would crack up an ice-berg lol.

                                                                      John

Comment By: Freejohn carter on May 31, 2009 04:20:00 PM Report
Len. You have a sense of humour that would crack up an ice-berg lol.

                                                                      John

Comment By: PremiumJoe McNinney on April 6, 2009 05:38:31 AM Report
Feeling better? Jolen asks this at the bottom, you are doing ok? Joe
Comment By: FreeQuiltingLady on April 6, 2009 03:07:41 AM Report
I enjoyed reading this before and I got a chuckle out of it again.  Thanks for reposting it.  It should be a classic............:o)

Pen

Comment By: FreeThe Mystic Poet on April 5, 2009 01:37:31 AM Report
Good thing too len, nothing of your's should disapear.
Comment By: Freeb doneff on April 1, 2009 06:02:31 AM Report
Ah Len, only you...I will forever have this rolling in my marbles if I stop by the roadside...nothing like baring your backside to empty your bladder on an old country road while cows look at you and wonder why you are hiding from car lights, lol..
Loved it, but that's no surprise..
nh
Comment By: FreeFilthy on March 31, 2009 02:13:40 PM Report
Glad this one was put back!
Comment By: FreeFLETCHER on March 31, 2009 02:40:11 AM Report

I love it thru and thru. Most of all the squating and whizzing part. This reminds me of one I wrote when I was still drinking...There she lie in the moonlight...With nothing on but a nighty..The moon was shining on the nipple of her tit...HOLY GOD O'MIGHTY....


Thanks for the memories and the laughs my friend......Fletch

*Bravo!

Comment By: FreeSteve on March 30, 2009 09:43:43 PM Report

Len this has top 10 written all over it. 


Comment By: PremiumLinda Jo on March 30, 2009 08:55:35 PM Report
i think it might be a good thing you layed off the bottle...haha  but it does help the reader's experience to have enjoyed a glass of wine before reading...is that where the giggles are coming from????  :o)   sheegiggles
Comment By: PremiumShe Whispers on March 30, 2009 07:23:02 PM Report
Now what can one say after reading this??(( Smiles...
 Sounds like a strange  passion to me my dear!!!
 Hugs ~ She Whispers





 


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