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Author Name: ModeratorLadyDragonwyck 6 Comments
Date Added: September 23, 2003 08:09:04 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Once More , Trying
Trying, once more, to understand.
Understanding,through confusion, a twisted
reality.
Reality, an elusive mistress, adds more
detours.
Detours, too many too many, journey Me into
confusion.
Confusion, I am not allowed to be right, reigns
Reigns, the Dominant Matriarch, constantly
opposing.
Opposing Me, the Dominant Matriarch shrugs, her
favorite pasttime.
Pasttime, Me usually losing, of her choice.
Choices, Me trying to assemble, the Dominant
Matriarch in charge.
Charge along, no Rebel allowed, the Dominant
Matriarch rules to understand.
Understand, once more,Me trying!!!
Author's Notes:
Just another small slice of in-law family life. Yup, me mum-in-law, certainly is..... ( April 2003 )
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeCynthia Jones on January 19, 2005 12:38:46 PM Report
I don't have a mother-in-law. Never had one. I love the way you wrote this Lady D. *S* Cynthia
Comment By: FreePaul Peter McLean on July 6, 2004 06:33:40 PM Report
I love the clever way you've arranged this, Lady D. Clever idea, executed well.
Comment By: PremiumMary Lou Allen on June 9, 2004 08:57:13 PM Report
Ummm. Do I understand. This confusion can kill. Run for your life. Very well done, Lady Dragonwyck. ML
Comment By: FreeAlec Wilson on September 25, 2003 12:33:43 PM Report
Very nicely crafted. No matter what you do it's not good enough. Like it. Alec
Comment By: FreeThe Bag Lady on September 23, 2003 04:51:12 PM Report
Love your play on words~
Loved the message, too~
Margaret.....the bag lady
Comment By: PremiumShe Whispers on September 23, 2003 11:56:04 AM Report
THE WAY YOU WRITE IS SO REFRESHING..LOVE IT>>> INTERESTING>>>>




 


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