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CHANGES IN THE MIRROR
                                                   CHANGES IN THE MIRROR
 
VERSE ONE...........
Now all you can see,   *
is your own perspective,    *
and though it maddening seems,
that all you can be,    *
is your own agonizing dark reflection.   *
You ponder and festor
over
what you, what it is to me.  *
Will we finally get to be,  *
who,what,where,and when,
that we've struggled,
and always dreamed to know,   *
and continuously see...........
 
VERSE TWO...........
In your feverish denial,
and your hopeless plite to recognize,
we've grown ckloser then we've ever been,   *
and now that's time to let it all fall in,    *
you ask those again questions.
How long will it take?   *
Where will we go?    *
What will we do?  *
Who will certainly know?
Your changes of reflection,
has a desperate light,
a deciding intention.
It's time for it, us, the show.   *
We wait, you wait for Gods final cue.  *
 
VERSE THREE.........
Now all that's left to see,   *
when you look at you,
when you look at we,
is who you've become,
that improved reflection,
brighter,smiling, no more.....
willing to scream and run,
and you're able and willing,
to allow,
 and see at what we have become.   *
No longer afraid and weary,
just pleasantly happy to be ,
exactly what you see,
that humble, graceful,change ,
in our beautiful mirror.
Author's Notes:
my son diego lucero and i wrote this together the little * means he either wrote all or most of the line. enjoy
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