I said " I Love you to early" by Brian Davy

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		Date Added: July 26, 2009 23:07:10	Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Category: Broken Hearts

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I said " I Love you to early"

In the warmth of her smile and outstretched arms

We met on a cool fall day

We walked through the wind on the rocky shore

While laughing all day

As you lay in my arms by the fire that night

I whispered “I love you”

But it lacked that burning desire inside

And my head knew my heart wasn’t true

(Chorus)

I said “I love you too early”

It seems my heart hadn’t healed from the pain

And your love for me just couldn’t change what I felt

I was sadly caught in the past

For weeks I kept struggling not knowing

What I should say or do

I m so sorry that I couldn’t love you

The way I told you I do

So on a cold winter’s morning

We hugged and said our goodbyes

And as I drove on for hours in a blinding storm

I finally realized….

(Chorus)

I said “I love you too early”

It seems my heart hadn’t healed from the pain

And your love for me just couldn’t change what I felt

I was sadly caught in the past

(Bridge)

When I see that girl now it’s sad to think

How innocently she still believes

With all her heart I am her special man

And why won’t my heart believe

So I go on living and we’re still miles apart

Like that day we met in the fall

(Chorus)

I said “I love you too early”

It seems my heart hadn’t healed from the pain

And your love for me just couldn’t change what I felt

I was sadly caught in the past

Author's Notes:

Kind of a poem in the form of a song. Interested in your thoughts good or bad, any suggestions, if you think it is has merit to be a song or just a poem.

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	Comment By: Barbara Demasson on August 18, 2009 03:59:03 PM	Report
	It is best not to speak from the head where important matters of the heart are concerned. I was caught up in the content of this piece...focused on how the pain of the past ruined this chance at true love. Your heart needed time to heal...and now...so does hers. Such a sad piece...I feel this deeply. ~Barbara~ Respond To This Comment

	Comment By: She Whispers on August 6, 2009 12:30:27 PM	Report
	Brian, This is amazing song... Your words express so well.... You have a tender loving heart... every song writer need to feel... Thank you for your comment on my very humble poem.... ~Always She Whispers Respond To This Comment

	Comment By: Shelia Pinter Myers on July 27, 2009 12:21:32 PM	Report
	Hi Brian, I person found this to be a very good song lyric too/ I really enjoyed reading it! Keep up the wonderful work! Very sad romantic write! Angelface Respond To This Comment

	Comment By: Jessica Ruth Myr on July 27, 2009 05:24:43 AM	Report
	I think it definitely works as lyrics better than as a poem, I think. I really do like the way it flows, and how it isn't terribly cluttered, and the message is clear and sad. It's lovely and simple and genuine. My only suggestion is that you find a synonym to substitute for "stuck" in your chorus. This is purely subjective and probably just my perception, but the way that word sounds kind of breaks up the lyric flow for me. I think it's the heaviness of the vowel sound followed by such a pronounced consonant. Again, probably just me, so feel free to ignore me on it. ^^; Respond To This Comment

	Comment By: Graham Jones on July 27, 2009 02:45:19 AM	Report
	I really think you should have put this under the catagory of lyrics as for me thats definately what it feels like and pretty good at that~Graham. Respond To This Comment