"Whispers by Moonlight" by Sergio Ayotte

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"Whispers by Moonlight"

"Whispers by Moonlight"

Waking up to this day that exists enveloped by radiant golden sunshine strands.
I thank Our Lord for the life he has created for me, for us, for everyone.
I thank him for those serene moments when we sleep, and are able to whisper to our hearts, and minds,
the names of all those we cherish, and love.
I also offer an acknowledgement of gratitude for those souls that have touched our hearts, and lives.
I thank God for the innate gift of being able to discern between right, and wrong, and being able to choose the path of light without hesitation.
What I will always thank Our Lord for the rest of my eternity though will be for that special gift that he bestowed upon me when he created my being.
That gift is that, forever after, when I gaze at a full moon at midnight.
Whenever I see two people in love's embrace, and kiss.
Whenever I am graced with the gift of touch, taste and sight of a fig tree's vibrant fruit, and flesh,
I will remember your heart.
I will remember your heart entwined with mine when that first soft Autumn evening breeze grazes my being.
I will miss your touch, your smile, your laughter, and the jasmine scent of your body, as that soft Autumn evening breeze again whispers your name to my dreams, Silently, Softly, Lovingly.
As the gentle whisper of your name cascades within my shattered countenance, that soft, silken breeze will leave my side to travel through the moonlit night, past the universe, past the azure firmament, and sparkling blanket of stars, to finally arrive in Heaven, and lay our hearts lovingly embracing, within God's loving hands, and dreams.

Author's Notes:

I wrote it with the the thought of how it would feel to truly be in an unconditional love. A love that exists for the sole purpose of loving and not wanting to change the other person for our own benefit. It was a simple statement to love and to the beauty of the nature that accompanies us everyday and sometimes we don't acknowledge it. I also wrote it in a manner that the matter of religious orientation of the person that is reading this poem is not important as what you truly feel in your heart and soul. The God that I wrote about is a God that loves all of us not just a select few, it can be their own belief of a superior being, but in the end the poem is about love and our continuing quest for optimism and the relentless striving of the human heart to hang on to that sometimes evanescent creature called Hope!

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	Comment By: Pamela A. Lamppa on September 15, 2009 07:53:38 PM	Report
	Beautiful prose to support your faith. A lovely piece to think on, sink yourself into and blossom with. Nice work. ~Pamela Respond To This Comment

	Comment By: Moon Fairy on September 10, 2009 02:03:10 AM	Report
	A breath of fresh air, a pleasure to read. Welcome Sergio-- ~Tracie Respond To This Comment

	Comment By: guest_writer on September 9, 2009 08:57:51 AM	Report
	this is profound. and you're religious and spiritual. Respond To This Comment

	Comment By: MoonStar on September 9, 2009 12:16:51 AM	Report
	One word.... Perfection!!!! Moonie x Respond To This Comment

	Comment By: Barbara Demasson on September 8, 2009 05:55:30 PM	Report
	The change from the expressions of gratitude to the remembrance was gradual and lovely. I thought "I will remember your heart" was the perfect place to end this piece. The portion that follows starting with " I will remember your heart entwined with mine" is emotive, deeply touching and sincere and could definitely stand as its own creation. Beautiful expression Sergio. I particularly enjoyed the lines of remembrance at the end. Thank you for sharing. ~Barbara~ Respond To This Comment

	Comment By: Shelia Pinter Myers on September 8, 2009 03:41:52 PM	Report
	Welcome to creative-poems Sergio. Your poem is full of love and I feel with you in your heart in which the love you hunger for! I pray God will bless you abondantly! Many blessings to you, in your journey of writing! can not wait to read more! God Bless, Angelface Respond To This Comment

	Comment By: Sandra on September 8, 2009 03:41:29 PM	Report
	Very uplifting. This starts out as what appears to be a prayer but evolves to the Narrator speaking to a beloved. Very original. Respond To This Comment

	Comment By: She Whispers on September 8, 2009 09:33:52 AM	Report
	Sergo, First of all Welcome to our Site!! Second.... your love poem reaches inside ones heart with such sensual whispers as gentle as a summer breeze... Love does strange things to us all as it plays with our heart with such a sweet melodies ... I am looking forward to more of your romantic heart .... WE all enjoy new writers and poets.... This is indeed a pleasure kind Sir Always ~ She Whispers ( India ~ She Respond To This Comment

	Comment By: Lady Dragonwyck on September 8, 2009 09:26:10 AM	Report
	Sergio: this is incredible. So soft, peaceful and spiritual. I look forward to more of your creative talent. Lady Dragonwyck Respond To This Comment

	Comment By: Linda Jo on September 8, 2009 08:15:34 AM	Report
	I feel a deep serenity that flows from these words. a heart that is grateful for even the little things like discerning between right and wrong and serene moments in humble prayer...a loving heart;tender and well expressed in these lines...very positive and full of hope. enjoyed this piece very much...a hearty welcome to you on creative-poems!! and please share with us more of your writings...Linda Jo Respond To This Comment