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Author Name: Premiumshortcakes25 5 Comments
Date Added: September 21, 2009 21:09:38 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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YOU THERE ON THE BACK ROW
YOU THERE ON THE BACK ROW
You there on the back row,
face red and tear soaked,
all alone and feeling that bitter hole,
she's not really lying there you know.
A little warmth from her imagination,
from her heart and purist soul,
has left some mark ,
a little hope.
Look around what do you see?
A daughter, a son,  a small  angelic baby,
a legacy and richness of love,
to fill your sorrowful blow!
So.........
You there on the back row,
face red and tear soaked,
replace that broken soul,
with emeralds and gold,
she left in her hope filled soul.
Come a little closer.
Hold her loved ones nearer, dear.
Show them you knew her,
and still her you know.
You there on the back row,
Let her love guide you,
to let you peacefully grow!
Author's Notes:
This was written for my foster mamma who passed away on my birthday.
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Comments:
Comment By: Freenoah count on September 22, 2009 09:26:01 AM Report
Apparently her life and death filled your life with a tradition of love.  Good to see love grow and expressed so poignantly.  
Comment By: FreeMoonStar on September 22, 2009 01:43:40 AM Report
Maggie this was wonderful! I understand what you were saying and so agree with the meaning within.. You brought out magic in this.. A dedication worthy in words that were beauty in itself..

 

Moonie xx

Comment By: PremiumLinda Jo on September 21, 2009 11:59:58 PM Report
i think you are telling us not to be so sad...and celebrate her life...she was a doer...a woman that got things done...a woman who gave the gift of love...yes we must celebrate ...with courage and reach out like she would have done.  i like the strength behind your words.
Comment By: PremiumAnn on September 21, 2009 10:05:01 PM Report
Beautifully said with a dose of realism. Nice work.
Comment By: ModeratorLady Dragonwyck on September 21, 2009 09:46:19 PM Report

Maggie: this is lovely.  Such a heart-felt dedication.  


Lady D






 


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