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Author Name: Premiumshortcakes25 4 Comments
Date Added: October 20, 2009 00:10:21 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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TINY HELL
TINY HELL
She lies there in her,
tiny bed,
but mommy can't kiss her ,
tiny head.
She's trying to figure out,
all her tiny parts,
but doctor says theres ,
something wrong with,
her tiny heart.
Hunger touches her tiny tummy,
but her tiny mouth,
is split ,
and theres no ability for ,
tiny sucklings.
Her tiny legs move up and down,
 but her tiny feet ,
can't kck the proper sound.
Inward torward each other,
 do they face,
and as she lies there in her ,
tiny crib,
boulder size tears trace down her,
tiny face.
She opens up her ,
tiny eyes,
but her drowning little mind,
won't even let her imagination,
take her to a ,
tiny better place.
She balls up her ,
tiny fingers,
around the nurses little pinkie,
but even tiny excitement,
will forever close her ,
tiny tiny eyes.
Momma's heart and breath fell,
when she seen little Heaven's
Great big Tiny Hell!
Author's Notes:
Heaven is my cousin's newborn baby. she suffers from fluid on the brain ,a heart that developed upside down, ceft pallet and club feet.  The slightest bit of stimulation to her and it sends her heart racing too much blood to the brain so she can't be touched or startled . I ask for prayers for tiny Heaven!
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeFLETCHER on October 25, 2009 05:30:26 PM Report
The depth of your healtfelt plea reaches within the spirit of my soul!
You have my thoughts and prayers! LOVE TO YOU!
Fletch

Comment By: ModeratorLady Dragonwyck on October 20, 2009 09:38:14 AM Report

Such sadness.  Prayers for the child and those who love her.


Lady Dragonwyck


Comment By: Freee. Gene Myers on October 20, 2009 08:48:38 AM Report
You have them.  ... Gene
Comment By: FreeLeonard Wilson on October 20, 2009 04:51:10 AM Report
This is heartbreaking beyond imagining. My prayers are with Heaven's parents....len




 


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