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Author Name: Freeredcoatsister 2 Comments
Date Added: November 02, 2009 19:11:32 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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To The One I Give My Love To
To some your kiss is sweet as wet dew drops.
 
Others feel your wrath like a sharp new blade.
 
The taste is like honey and candy pops.
 
Your hate is so blinding others seek shade.
 
With your tender words my heart starts to stir.
 
I wish you were mine when I see you shine.
 
But your curse shall kill my little babe's birth.
 
Yet, your time is short, you shall soon decline.
 
Your eyes melt the walls of my frozen heart.
 
Your hands craft the wooden rafts of my shack.
 
Your love divides the seas that keep us apart.
 
Your shoulders protect my back from attack.
 
You are the source of my blood's rich resource.
 
My heart shall render no pain or remorse.
 
 
Author's Notes:
My first attempt at a sonnet.  This is how I once loved my husband.
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeDonielle on November 10, 2009 02:22:08 PM Report
Hi, this poem was enjoyable to read. Wow! you have really been writing. I could feel your heart in it. Keep up the good work! D. Smith
Comment By: PremiumLinda Jo on November 2, 2009 10:26:09 PM Report
the sonnet, such a beautiful form.  you have expressed such depth of your love in this piece...i hear the sound of a mixture of ancient and modern.  Your sonnet carries much weight!




 


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