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		Author Name: Marluxia
		Date Added: November 27, 2009 03:11:51	2 Comments
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Category: Haiku

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Haiku Hell

The wind blows through me
A sharp gust, cold like the night
And then disappears

The waves crash gently
On the surface of the sea
So hypnotising

Flickering Embers
Fire burning oh so bright
You, I remember

Sun shines in the sky
A warm embrace to be felt
Very loving glow

Engulfed in darkness
Moonlight glaring through the clouds
Wolves howls, heard throughout

My little notebook
Open, lying on that page
Swamped by memories

A graceful smile
A graceul posture and stride
A goddess of grace

Leaves falling slowly
Footpath, littered in nature
Autumn already?

Artistic nature
Melodies heard, all throughout
Musician's Forest

Basement filled with chains
This place, damp, dark and horrid
Sickly slavery

Author's Notes:

I've been meaning to do some Haiku to get it ticked off my "Poetry style I HAVE worked with" list. Seeing as they are rather short, I thought I'd write up ten unrelated ones and upload 'em all at once so I can say I have done Haiku in the past before.

Please let me know what you think ^_^

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Comments:

	Comment By: Pamela A. Lamppa on December 11, 2009 12:02:10 AM	Report
	You have penned well. These are excellent haiku - out of the box - and NOT your standard fare which is quite refreshing. Well done. ~Pamela Respond To This Comment

	Comment By: e. Gene Myers on November 27, 2009 06:57:37 PM	Report
	What I think is that you are good at haikus. Tying them all together takes a lot of skill and patience. And to keep it interesting too, is almost impossible. Very well done. Gene Respond To This Comment