War, Hate, and Destruction. by HOPE

		Author Name: tinadee	3 Comments
		Date Added: April 27, 2010 00:04:22	Average Score: (Needs 2)
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War, Hate, and Destruction.

War, Hate & Destruction

Tears

She Cries

Over years

Of Hate and Lies

Looking out my window watching tears fall.

Mother Nature is crying for us all

Love and Virtue

On deaf ears

I do

Fear

Author's Notes:

TetractysTetractys, consists of at least 5 lines of 1, 2, 3, 4, 10 syllables (total of 20). Tetractys can be written with more than one verse, but must follow suit with an inverted syllable count. Tetractys can also bereversed and written 10, 4, 3, 2, 1. Double Tetractys: 1, 2, 3, 4, 10, 10, 4, 3, 2, 1
It doesn't say they have to rhyme but I couldn't help it.

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Comments:

	Comment By: e. Gene Myers on May 2, 2010 10:10:35 PM	Report
	I like that style. I'll have to study it a little further. As for the message in the poem, maybe with all the stuff nature is doing right now, she is getting even with us for what we are doing to the planet. She will win, Thank God. thanks for sharing Gene Respond To This Comment

	Comment By: Jillian K. Alexis on April 29, 2010 12:11:28 PM	Report
	Wow, you never cease to amaze me Tina. Is there any form of poetry that you can't write? This is sad, yet shows your talent as a writer. Great job!!!...Hugz...Jillian Respond To This Comment

	Comment By: Andrew on April 27, 2010 08:21:42 AM	Report
	more demonstrated mastery over a new style - fascinating format, powerful message - exceptional Respond To This Comment