Beyond The Darkness by Steve

		Author Name: LaPoeta	9 Comments
		Date Added: May 15, 2010 01:05:22	Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Beyond The Darkness

Passion craves our souls like a hungry beast

Flesh became barter will we be able atone for the sin

From deep within us the other side of what love is

All that we are starts to slowly close in and consume

Reason is chased away and burns within the flame

Winds scatter the ashes in darkness with no direction

We can’t get away so we are left to relive it over again

Such is the night that quietly stalks us like prey

Author's Notes:

What I am talking about is passion fueled by lust for another, the forbidden fruit of being with someone else when you are in a relationship.

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	Comment By: Jonathan McCollum on July 29, 2010 07:37:10 PM	Report
	great description of emotional peril. if anything good ever came from all these rotten emotions, it's poetry. Respond To This Comment

	Comment By: The Bag Lady on June 11, 2010 11:13:47 AM	Report
	Well, Steve~! This is just what the human side of us brings forth, and passion is to be savored....Keep the coals of love alive~!...Night brings us to a crossroads, oft times.... Good read, Steve! Margaret...the Baglady Respond To This Comment

	Comment By: Leonard Wilson on May 17, 2010 07:06:05 PM	Report
	Guilty pleasures of cheating.....Been there a lot of years ago...The guilt wasn't worth it...Firey stuff, Steve...len Respond To This Comment

	Comment By: Adri on May 17, 2010 04:08:22 AM	Report
	This is just gorgeous! The forbidden fruit looks always more inviting, until you taste it, then sometimes it is not at all what you picture it to be. Great write Steve. Adri x Respond To This Comment

	Comment By: SilkinTears on May 16, 2010 07:53:20 PM	Report
	Passion is an emotion that should be desired and felt without guilt. I agree with Barbara. There is a feeling of guilt in this write. Well expressed Steve. Helen Respond To This Comment

	Comment By: Moon Fairy on May 15, 2010 11:46:13 PM	Report
	Steve, I concur with Glata and Barbara. No guilt or regrets, only human desire and let me say... Loved this, well done!! Hugs, ~Tracie Respond To This Comment

	Comment By: Glata on May 15, 2010 02:47:00 PM	Report
	A scorcher, me pal...but agreeing with Barbara here...passion is supposed to burn white-hot...If it's accompanied by a love that burns just as brightly, then it's to be desired on every level! Welcome it with open arms... Great write, Steve...I, too, enjoyed this... Hugs! glata Respond To This Comment

	Comment By: Barbara Demasson on May 15, 2010 11:26:09 AM	Report
	Call me strange but I'm not seeing a problem here. Passion should burn hot and wild when it is felt with no regrets...as long as it isn't hurting anyone. Welcome night...bring it on. I sense guilt in this piece. Nicely expressed Steve! Bravo...I have enjoyed this poem. ~Barbara~ Respond To This Comment

	Comment By: She Whispers on May 15, 2010 08:00:25 AM	Report
	MY GOODNESS...I know all about that stalking darkness..... Love can really haunt us sometimes... It scares me to death now its always so here then gone tomorrow.... Respond To This Comment