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Author Name: Freetinadee 6 Comments
Date Added: May 22, 2010 03:05:02 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Murder
Murder

With a gaping whole, my heart bleeds,
From the daggers they placed there.
Promises to fill all my needs.
Why did I chose my heart to share?

Love can wound very deeply,
But I shall not become weakly.

Tumbling the walls of my heart fell,
From the bombs that exploded in there.
Escaping from my own private hell,
My heart's pieces scattered everywhere

Building a heart of steel,
Cold and empty, I feel.

With a gaping whole, my heart bleeds,
From the bullets that they buried there.
Many warnings I did not heed.
Did they ever really care?

Murder committed with the words they say.
This will happen when with weapons we play.

Author's Notes:
Love as a weapon.
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeAndrew on May 24, 2010 04:14:59 PM Report
fascinating - a poem within a poem?  an unconventional but totally effective glimpse at love....all too true, at times, too
Comment By: FreeTanya Harrison on May 22, 2010 11:50:30 PM Report
Loved this one Tina, great stuff.  Love is explosive and penetrating almost everytime.
Comment By: PremiumShe Whispers on May 22, 2010 02:33:10 PM Report
This  is just awesome....oh how they play with passion words to get there thrills..... Comparing notes..... Write on poetic sister....
Comment By: ModeratorLady Dragonwyck on May 22, 2010 10:34:53 AM Report
Tina:  what a write!!!  GREAT contribution to Ann's Calendar.

 

Lady D

Comment By: PremiumLinda Jo on May 22, 2010 09:27:27 AM Report
Very insightful...the hurt caused by ones who profess to love.  You did an excellent job of showing that love is more than an emotion...it is an action and should behave in the kindest, most considerate way.  a pretense of love can be murderous and cause the heart to suffer immensely and die. 
Comment By: FreeMelody on May 22, 2010 09:21:19 AM Report
words are the most powerful of weapons, penatrating the heart where they stay embedded for life. There is no medicine to cure or rid them from the mind.
Excellent read




 


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