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Author Name: Freeshellers 8 Comments
Date Added: June 20, 2010 22:06:39 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Live Me a Love Letter
 
I ask not for notes from wooers,

Or for sweet sonnets so divine,

I don’t require pretty words,

Nor need a literary shrine,

 

Pray, don’t comment on the beauty,

Found in my hair, my smile, my face,

“Eyes like stars” mean little to me,

Surely mere speech won’t win my grace,

 

Good man, it’s not your gifts I want,

There are no jewels I long for,

Your material wealth don’t flaunt,

For it’s not things that I adore,

 

My desire, yes it is simple,

And if we are fated to be,

Keep your love for me quite ample,

With your actions prove it to me.

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Comments:
Comment By: ModeratorHenry M. on March 12, 2011 12:03:44 PM Report
In my eyes it is the best way to show someone you love them, simple gestures like opening a door, an arm around the waist or a simple touch of the hand can speak volumes that material gifts could never say. Excellent writing Michelle.   Henry
Comment By: PremiumMicky McMaster on January 27, 2011 11:41:17 AM Report


Well done,Michelle


Sweet piece


Micky

Comment By: FreeTanya Harrison on June 22, 2010 12:00:27 AM Report
Oh my Lady, isn't that true.  If you want to know where a man's heart lies watch his actions.  They say it all.  Loved your clever poem.  It's great!
Comment By: FreeBarbara Carleton on June 21, 2010 06:02:54 PM Report
NAILED IT!
Comment By: FreeAfsaneh on June 21, 2010 01:10:05 PM Report
"Keep your love for me quite ample, with your actions prove it to me"
I agree, it's nice to see the truth in the poem. It was lovely.

Afsaneh
Comment By: PremiumThe Bag Lady on June 21, 2010 10:48:01 AM Report
Indeed, Shelle.....Money isn't everything....Love, attention, and respect the top of the list...This was a greatly constructed work, and a joy to read....Thanks for sharing...

Margaret...the Baglady

Comment By: Freeviv brady on June 21, 2010 05:14:10 AM Report
a finely crafted piece. enjoyed reading this (though i fear his lady doth protest too much lol)     : )
Comment By: FreeNichola Whittaker on June 20, 2010 11:11:24 PM Report
A sweet poem, and I feel the same regarding love, material things aren't wanted, it's their time and thought

lovely

Nik





 


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