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Author Name: PremiumTristan 10 Comments
Date Added: July 20, 2010 19:07:39 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Type: Rhyming
Category: Love/Romance Add To Favorites | Text Only
 
The Mystery of You
 
 
 
The Mystery of You 
 
 
Do falling stars have strength to grant a dream
to lonely poets who have lost their way?
What quilting could be woven with no seam
that covers naked bodies as they lay?
What fragrant scent enraptures lonely minds
and captures in its bond passionís desire?
Will thoughtful words become the tie that binds
with honest oaths to love they both aspire?
The sound of wishful silence of your tear
is music to the soul that breathes you in.
To mystic intellect I now draw near,
is this enchantment where love will begin?
What kind of dreamerís maze must I walk through
to be inside the mystery of you?
 
 
 
 
 
Author's Notes:
An English sonnet written in iambic pentameter regarding the poet's fantasy about his Muse. The poet refers to himself in the first person singular "I" while the Muse is referred to in the second person singular "you".  The Muse and her poet are referred to in the third person plural as "they" on a couple of occasions as participants in rhetorical questions.
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeLeonard Wilson on October 24, 2011 07:50:34 PM Report
I've noticed the ladies eat this stuff up. Know your audience, as they say. The last line was great. The rest.....well pretentious meanderings come to mind...Yeah, I know....but I couldn't resist the title. :o)...len


Comment By: FreeAlison Storm Wolf on August 13, 2010 02:17:02 PM Report
Hi Tristan
You have an olde worlde charm about your writing. A nice breath of fresh air.
Alison xt
Comment By: FreeMelody on August 3, 2010 03:42:44 PM Report

As all of your work I found this really enjoyable but this line just made the poem for me

"The sound of wishful silence of your tear
is music to the soul that breathes you in."

Excellent


Comment By: FreeLinda Jo on July 24, 2010 02:33:51 PM Report
Tristan, you've chosen a handful of delightful mysteries to describe the wonders of your muse...falling stars that grant wishes, the sound of  wishful silence in her tears, a lingering fragrance that stirs a lonely mind...and my favorite...quilting woven without a seam.  who has the answer to these mysteries? ...they nest in the intimate chambers of your muse...

 

loved every line!

 

Comment By: FreeCindy Bendel on July 22, 2010 08:58:08 AM Report
Breathtaking and esoteric....your muse will be more than pleased.
~Cindy

Comment By: FreeBarbara Demasson on July 21, 2010 08:50:15 PM Report
This is beautiful...especially the last two closing lines. Bravo!

~Barbara D.~ 

Comment By: FreeThe Bag Lady on July 21, 2010 11:05:17 AM Report
Ahhhhh, dear 'lonely poet'.....Once again you have charmed us with your expertise at the Sonnet...Lovely, of course, light and floating~!  Always a pleasure to see that you have posted as we have an enjoyable read ahead of us....

Margaret....a friend in words...

Comment By: PremiumShe Whispers on July 21, 2010 07:10:32 AM Report
Tristan,
 My goodness you will steal all the ladies heart with this amazing beautiful poem..
The poem reaches out and with such softness... your an amazing writer..... Always  A Pleasure to read ....

Comment By: ModeratorAdri on July 21, 2010 03:32:52 AM Report
Oh this is just beautiful. The first two lines set the mood and it is carried through the whole poem. A very special piece, I truly love it

Adri x

Comment By: FreePamela A. Lamppa on July 20, 2010 10:50:26 PM Report
Ahhh, that elusive muse mustering the sonnet from the poet as no other can.  Nice work again with sonnet.  I enjoyed this very much.  I especially loved those two opening lines.  Thank you.  ~Pamela




 


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