Lusty Whine by Tanya Harrison

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		Date Added: September 01, 2010 21:09:03	Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Lusty Whine

“Lusty Whine”

You roam in my mind,

That’s so unkind.

I keep pushing rewind,

Refusing to leave you behind.

You’re a rancid sip of red wine

That stained my lips divine.

I saw the road signs to

Avoid your kind.

But nothing but your prime

Ripped chest was on my mind.

Author's Notes:

I wrote this last night. It just came out. Who knows?

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Comments:

	Comment By: Andrew on September 8, 2010 10:18:27 AM	Report
	who knows and what does it matter? it matters that this is a wonderfully expressive insight by a masterful writer Respond To This Comment

	Comment By: Barbara Demasson on September 3, 2010 02:06:06 AM	Report
	Hmmm...those darn ripped chests will get a gal every darn time! smiles ~Barbara D.~ Respond To This Comment

	Comment By: colin skilton on September 2, 2010 05:48:00 PM	Report
	a little confusing my dear Tanya, what were you drinking last night!!! Interesting piece that needs a little rewrite for the ending as it doesn't make much sense. Colinxxx Respond To This Comment

	Comment By: Robert on September 2, 2010 11:04:05 AM	Report
	The first four strophes make sense, but the last confuses me, I believe it is because of the two buts The first I believe is not needed, and the word "prime" I find very confusing in the context of this poem. Respond To This Comment