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Clichéd Love
I always thought those clichéd
Expressions of love in popular music
Quite meaningless:-
Heartache;
Heart sore;
Love sick.

Now I know whoever coined them first
Felt the same pain I feel.
These are all real physical symptoms,
Real pain;
Laughable and unendurable 
At the same time.

There is some excuse 
I suppose,
For unwary youth
To be trapped by these cords.
Old men, you would have thought,
Had enough wisdom and experience
To point out the dangers.

Now I know none are immune 
To the tricks of love.
The traps are everywhere,
Even the old and married
Are at risk -
Especially as they
Have the least to gain
And the most to lose.

Yet when life shrinks to narrow horizons
Even the briefest of voyages 
Seems an adventure worth pursuing.
One last climb up the hill 
To see the setting sun
Fade in a blaze of red glory,
To see the high clouds lit from below
And the bright world dissolve into beauty,
Is an effort worth the making,
A sight worth the seeing,
A risk worth the taking.

Author's Notes:
There is no fool like an old fool except an old fool in love.
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Comment By: FreeBarbara Demasson on September 30, 2010 11:29:49 AM Report
We are never to old to seek love and never to old to lose love. You are not a fool but a man wiser for the experience. And you know why pursuing love IS an effort worth making...you last stanza shows us why. I have always maintained that to love is a risk...but it is one well worth taking. Beautiful expressions David, the last stanza was especially breathtaking.

~Barbara D.~ 

Comment By: FreeCindy Bendel on September 29, 2010 08:23:09 PM Report
You are not an old fool....you are a romantic, and a romantic never gives up hope!
It is what it is dear....the drive to find a bit of intimacy and acceptance in a world of mortality. 
Excellent penning my dear friend.
~Cindy 

Comment By: PremiumShe Whispers on September 29, 2010 05:08:38 PM Report
We all fall into the arms  of a passion we need and want....
I suppose ....You could call me a old fool as well......
 I have been hurt so much by being so trusting.....

Comment By: Freee. Gene Myers on September 29, 2010 01:01:42 PM Report
David you are a quandary to me.  With our latest communications I'd never have believed you could put such beauty in a poem. 
"Is an effort worth the making,
A sight worth the seeing,
A risk worth the taking."
This is totally life's beauty as seen through your pen.  She'd be a lucky lady who would  have you love her like this poem.
"There is no fool like an old fool except an old fool in love."
True, except that the old fool knows what love takes and what he wants.
Loved it
Gene
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Comment By: PremiumGraham Jones on September 29, 2010 02:00:45 AM Report
Thoroughly enjoyed reading this even though the truth hurts as they say,and yes I allowed myself a wry smile.
Comment By: PremiumRoger Bacon on September 28, 2010 06:47:34 PM Report
I've read a lot of poems about love over the years but I like yours and how you show it simply as taking ordinary out of the day. 




 


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